The person who realized that his partner, in highest position in the police station in the city and has bad rumors, arewas going to kill him because that person thought the person who was intimidated by the letter about his incident that the police doesn't know that he killed the person by putting a poison on that person's meal, was his partner. The person who realized that his partner, in highest position in the police station in the city and has bad rumors, was going to kill him because that person thought the person who was intimidated by the letter about his incident that the police doesn't know that he killed the person by putting a poison on that person's meal, was his partner.

A bit simpler: "The criminal realised that his partner, the police chief, knew about the poisoned flyer and was planning to kill him."

The person whoHe realized that his partner, ina highest position in the police station in the city and has bad rumors, are going-ranking police official with a bad reputation, planned to kill him. This is because thate person thought the person whobelieved that the individual who was intimidated by the letter about histhe incident tha- an incident the police doesn't know thatare unaware of, in which he killed the perssomeone by putting a poison on that person'soisoning their meal, - was his partner. He realized his partner, a high-ranking police official with a bad reputation, planned to kill him. This is because the person believed that the individual who was intimidated by the letter about the incident - an incident the police are unaware of, in which he killed someone by poisoning their meal - was his partner.

Because iIt must be that they areway, because he is only one who knowew about this incident. It must be that way, because he is only one who knew about this incident.

You can use singular they, but it's really only used if you are trying to obscure the gender of the character/person, if you don't know their gender, or if they have no gender. Here it seems like the character is a man, so better to just use "him".

Because it must be that they are the only one who knows about this incident. Because they are the only one who knows about this incident.

So, he triesd to invite his partner to his house and set a trap for him in front of the house. So, he tried to invite his partner to his house and set a trap for him in front of the house.

So, he tries to invites his partner to his house, and sets a trap in front of the house.out the front. So, he to invites his partner to his house, and sets a trap out the front.

His partner–who is in the high position in the police office, decided to go to the house because he thought it was good time to kill him. His partner decided to go to the house because he thought it was good time to kill him.

I have deleted the middle bit because it is something you have already mentioned previously and is not relevant to this sentence.

His partner–, who is in thea high position in the police office, decided to go to the house because he thought it was good time to kill him. His partner, who is in a high position in the police office, decided to go to the house because he thought it was good time to kill him.

He talked about this to his new partner, who was helping him to trace the disappeared handyman, and the nwew partner said that he wanted to go with him. He talked about this to his new partner, who was helping him to trace the disappeared handyman, and the new partner said that he wanted to go with him.

He talked about this to his new partner, to tracek the dmisapperedsing handyman, and t. The nwew partner said that he wanted to go with.come too. He talked about this to his new partner, to track the missing handyman. The new partner said that he wanted to come too.

They decided to get one more person from the police station who stands by the person who is in high position in police station, just in case. They decided to get one more person from the police station, just in case.

Not sure what you meant by the middle bit - like the high ranking person's assistant?

So, they 3 of them went to the house by a car. So, the 3 of them went to the house by a car.

So, they 3 three of them went to the house by a car. So, the three of them went to the house by car.

Of couse, this information was discussed in the guy in the high position's nhouse, so the police officers who iswere working on the project, knew everything, so they were also went to the house and they were hidinghid there. Of couse, this information was discussed in the guy in the high position's house, so the police officers who were working on the project knew everything, so they also went to the house and hid there.

Police = the police in general, the whole organisation Police officers = multiple individual officers

Of couse, this information was discussed in the guy in the high position's nouse, so polices who is working on the project, knew everything, so they were also went to the hose and they were hiding. Of couse, this information was discussed in the guy in the high position's nouse, so polices who is working on the project, knew everything, so they were also went to the hose and they were hiding.

Of course, this information was discussed at the high-ranking man’s house, so the police officers working on the case knew everything. They also went to the house and hid there.

They heard a strainge noise that sounded like a gunshot and, so they headed to the place where that sound came from. They heard a strange noise that sounded like a gunshot, so they headed to the place where that sound came from.

They heard a strainge noise that sounded like a gunshot and, so they headed to the place where thate sound came from. They heard a strange noise that sounded like a gunshot, so they headed to the place where the sound came from.

Before they heard the noise, the three guys were heading to the person who invited them anhad set a trip. Before they heard the noise, the three guys had set a trip.

Before tThey heard thea noise, and three guysmen were heading toward the person who had invited them and set, setting a triap. They heard a noise, and three men were heading toward the person who had invited them, setting a trap.

The guy in the high position in the police station, went forward first. The guy in the high position in the police station went forward first.

The guy in the highest position in the police station, went forward first. The guy in the highest position in the police station went forward first.

When he moved his legs towalked towards the house, he fell into thea hole. When he walked towards the house, he fell into a hole.

Even better --> "As he was walking towards the house, he fell into a hole." A hole rather than THE hole because this is the first time you are mentioning it. "Moved his legs" sort of makes me imagine he was just sort of randomly moving his legs around, not walking.

When he moved his legswalked closer to the house, he fell into the hole. When he walked closer to the house, he fell into the hole.

Yes, it was the triap that the person who invited them set. Yes, it was the trap that the person who invited them set.

Yes, ithis was the triap that the person who invited them had set. Yes, this was the trap that the person who invited them had set.

And he's died. And he died.

And he's died. And he's died.

The new partner of the person who fell into the hole was suprised and he had a handgun bacause he was ex-police officer, so he shot a gun and killed the person who invited them. The new partner of the person who fell into the hole was suprised and he had a handgun bacause he was ex-police officer, so he shot and killed the person who invited them.

He's used every bullet, so and then threw it away on the ground. He used every bullet, and then threw it away on the ground.

Another police officer that came to togetherwith him betrayed him and his boss and tried to kill him–who shot a gun. Another police officer that came with him betrayed him and tried to kill him.

When police officers made it to the place that heard the noise from, they saw that one person was going to shoot a gun to the another person who doesidn't have a handgun. When police officers made it to the place that heard the noise from, they saw that one person was going to shoot a gun to another person who didn't have a handgun.

Another rather than "the other" as this is the first time you are introducing this person, so they can't be THE other person.

One of police officers were managed to shoot a gun to the person who had a handgun and stopped to killinghim from killing the other person. One of police officers managed to shoot the person who had a handgun and stopped him from killing the other person.

No need to specify that they were shooting guns, as this is implied. NOW they can be THE other person, as they have been introduced previously.

But the person who didn't have a gun got injury oshot in his leg. But the person who didn't have a gun got shot in his leg.

Better to be more specific that just "injured" if possible.

That police officer were headingheaded over to thate injured person. That police officer headed over to the injured person.