March 23, 2021
Trying to find a way to keep calm
Last year, I was so depressed by stresses from work and family.
I used to work out or to play my instrument for releasing my stress, but it wasn't able to do that by COVID-19.
With my friends help, I am trying to write the emotion journal and to meditate.
By the emotion journal, I can face my true thinking that why I develop my feelings.
With the meditation, I can spare my time to avoid heavy stress situations.
Unlikely journaling, the mediation isn't formed my habit.
I will go the extra mile to make it a habit.
Trying to find a way to keep calm
Last year, I was sovery depressed byfrom stresses from due to work and family.
I used to work out or toand play my instrument forto releasinge my stress, but itI wasn't able to do that byanymore because of COVID-19.
WNow with my friend's help, I am trying to write thean emotion journal and to meditate.
You can also say, "Now with the help of my friend, I am ..." Also, you say "Now", to tell your reader that the events from now on are taking place in present tense.
ByFrom the emotion journal, I can face my true thinking thatand find out the reason why I develop my feelingsed depression.
In your essay try to use the same tense (past tense) as you started with. So instead of "I can face", use "I was able to face".
With the meditation, I can spare my time toand avoid heavy -stress situations.
Unlikfortunately, journaling, the and mediation isn't for med my aren't a habit.
"aren't" or "are not"
However, I will go the extra mile to make it a habit.
nice sentence, just add "however".
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Great job! I really enjoyed reading your essay. You only had a few minor errors but I understood what you were trying to get across. Good luck and keep learning!
March 26, 2021
Thanks for your comment :)
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Trying to find a way to keep calm This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Last year, I was so depressed by stresses from work and family. Last year, I was |
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I used to work out or to play my instrument for releasing my stress, but it wasn't able to do that by COVID-19. I used to work out |
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With my friends help, I am trying to write the emotion journal and to meditate.
You can also say, "Now with the help of my friend, I am ..." Also, you say "Now", to tell your reader that the events from now on are taking place in present tense. |
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By the emotion journal, I can face my true thinking that why I develop my feelings.
In your essay try to use the same tense (past tense) as you started with. So instead of "I can face", use "I was able to face". |
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With the meditation, I can spare my time to avoid heavy stress situations. With |
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Unlikely journaling, the mediation isn't formed my habit. Un "aren't" or "are not" |
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I will go the extra mile to make it a habit. However, I will go the extra mile to make it a habit. nice sentence, just add "however". |
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