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Juanpis

June 11, 2025

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I would like to travel to Argentina. I have been seeing on web page but is too expensive for me. I have time off at my job but i don't have all that money.

I am very excited to travel, I would want to visit the beach, the stadium in Buenos Aires and I would want to try the food. I keep to save money for travel to in December.

Today I am a little tired because at my job sometimes I have to work at the night. I enjoy working in the morning more because I have free time to eat in the beautiful place with my girlfriends or read fantasy books like Mistborns by Brandon Sanderson. I like doing many things in my free time to relax and clear my mind because sometimes at my job we are a little stressed.

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Daily... ?
"Daily" is an adjective, so it might be best to specify WHAT is daily.

I would like to travel to Argentina.

I have been seeing on web page bulooking at it online, but it is too expensive for me.

I have time off at my job, but iI don't have all that kind of money.

I am very excitereally looking forward to travel,ling. I would want to visit the beach, and the stadium in Buenos Aires, and I would want to try the food.

"Excited" isn't an adjective that I would use for something you want to do in the future. "Excited" feels to me like it is more about what's happening in the present.
"Eager" is an adjective that is projective. That is, you are excited about what is to come. "I am very eager to travel..."

"Looking forward to" is a more natural saying in this context. Although, you have to use "really" instead of "very", because "looking" is a verb, not an adjective.

I keep'm trying to save money forso I can travel tohere in December.

Today I am a little tired because at my job I sometimes I have to work atduring the night.

Sometimes, we use the term "night shift" for when a worker has to start work late at night and work until morning. "I work the night shift as a security officer at this establishment."

You work "at" a SPECIFIC time, but if it is a general period of time, you would use a different word like "during", "through", or "in":
"I got to work at 7:45 AM"
"I worked through the morning"
"At 12:30 PM, I had lunch"
"In the afternoon, I had lunch"

I enjoy working in the morning more because I have free time to eat here in theis beautiful place with my girlfriends or read fantasy books like Mistborns by Brandon Sanderson.

Do you have multiple romantic partners? A "boyfriend" or "girlfriend" is almost exclusively romantic.

I like doing many things in my free time to relax and clear my mind because sometimes at my job we areis a little stressedful.

"...sometimes at my job we are a little stressed" isn't grammatically incorrect, but "my job is a little stressful" might be a more natural way of putting it.

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Hope this helps, and keep up the good work!

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I would like to travel to Argentina.

Me encanta Argentina! I have traveled to Argentina before. It was a very beautiful country.

I have been seeing on web page but isresearching flights online, but they are too expensive for me.

I have time off atfrom my job, but iI don't have all thatenough money.

"I" is always capitalized.

I am very excitedager to travel,. I would want to visit the beach, the stadium in Buenos Aires, and I would want to try the food.

You could also say:
I am very eager to visit Buenos Aires because I want to explore their beautiful beaches, the stadium, and try their delicious food.

(Side note, if you get to visit Buenos Aires, try their milanesa. Muy rico!)

I keep toam saveing money forto travel to Argentina in December.

Today I am a little tired today because at my job sometimes I have to work at theI worked the graveyard shift last night.

"Graveyards" is the colloquial word in English for the overnight shift.

I enjoyprefer working in the morning more because Ithat allows me to have free time to eat in the beautiful place with my girlfriends or read fantasy books like Mistborns by Brandon Sanderson.

I removed "in the beautiful place" because it is an added detail that is not necessary and doesn't make sense in this context.

You aren't wrong in saying "I enjoy" I believe prefer is a more applicable word because you used "more" better. Using "more" suggests one option over another, though "more doesn't make sense in this context, thus "prefer" is most applicable.

I like/enjoy doing many relaxing things in my free time to relax and clear my mind because sometimes at my job we are a little stressedwork stresses me out.

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Your English is completely legible. I understand all your main points. You are doing well. I only made some minor edits, improving grammar and fluidity.

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Travel and DailyAbout My Day and Travel Aspirations.

Travel and Daily Post

Daily... ? "Daily" is an adjective, so it might be best to specify WHAT is daily.

I would like to travel to Argentina.


I would like to travel to Argentina.

Me encanta Argentina! I have traveled to Argentina before. It was a very beautiful country.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have been seeing on web page but is too expensive for me.


I have been seeing on web page but isresearching flights online, but they are too expensive for me.

I have been seeing on web page bulooking at it online, but it is too expensive for me.

I have time off at my job but i don't have all that money.


I have time off atfrom my job, but iI don't have all thatenough money.

"I" is always capitalized.

I have time off at my job, but iI don't have all that kind of money.

I am very excited to travel, I would want to visit the beach, the stadium in Buenos Aires and I would want to try the food.


I am very excitedager to travel,. I would want to visit the beach, the stadium in Buenos Aires, and I would want to try the food.

You could also say: I am very eager to visit Buenos Aires because I want to explore their beautiful beaches, the stadium, and try their delicious food. (Side note, if you get to visit Buenos Aires, try their milanesa. Muy rico!)

I am very excitereally looking forward to travel,ling. I would want to visit the beach, and the stadium in Buenos Aires, and I would want to try the food.

"Excited" isn't an adjective that I would use for something you want to do in the future. "Excited" feels to me like it is more about what's happening in the present. "Eager" is an adjective that is projective. That is, you are excited about what is to come. "I am very eager to travel..." "Looking forward to" is a more natural saying in this context. Although, you have to use "really" instead of "very", because "looking" is a verb, not an adjective.

I keep to save money for travel to in December.


I keep toam saveing money forto travel to Argentina in December.

I keep'm trying to save money forso I can travel tohere in December.

Today I am a little tired because at my job sometimes I have to work at the night.


Today I am a little tired today because at my job sometimes I have to work at theI worked the graveyard shift last night.

"Graveyards" is the colloquial word in English for the overnight shift.

Today I am a little tired because at my job I sometimes I have to work atduring the night.

Sometimes, we use the term "night shift" for when a worker has to start work late at night and work until morning. "I work the night shift as a security officer at this establishment." You work "at" a SPECIFIC time, but if it is a general period of time, you would use a different word like "during", "through", or "in": "I got to work at 7:45 AM" "I worked through the morning" "At 12:30 PM, I had lunch" "In the afternoon, I had lunch"

I enjoy working in the morning more because I have free time to eat in the beautiful place with my girlfriends or read fantasy books like Mistborns by Brandon Sanderson.


I enjoyprefer working in the morning more because Ithat allows me to have free time to eat in the beautiful place with my girlfriends or read fantasy books like Mistborns by Brandon Sanderson.

I removed "in the beautiful place" because it is an added detail that is not necessary and doesn't make sense in this context. You aren't wrong in saying "I enjoy" I believe prefer is a more applicable word because you used "more" better. Using "more" suggests one option over another, though "more doesn't make sense in this context, thus "prefer" is most applicable.

I enjoy working in the morning more because I have free time to eat here in theis beautiful place with my girlfriends or read fantasy books like Mistborns by Brandon Sanderson.

Do you have multiple romantic partners? A "boyfriend" or "girlfriend" is almost exclusively romantic.

I like doing many things in my free time to relax and clear my mind because sometimes at my job we are a little stressed.


I like/enjoy doing many relaxing things in my free time to relax and clear my mind because sometimes at my job we are a little stressedwork stresses me out.

I like doing many things in my free time to relax and clear my mind because sometimes at my job we areis a little stressedful.

"...sometimes at my job we are a little stressed" isn't grammatically incorrect, but "my job is a little stressful" might be a more natural way of putting it.

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