Jan. 29, 2022
Translation Practice
Another year has passed again, including my most loved ones.
2022, I hope that people I know and who know me have a bright future!
I only wish for myself, still flying against the wind, and making another great new chapter.
Of course, I know that everything needs to be done only by myself.
昔年又过；过去的，还有我最敬爱的人。
2022，我希望，我认识的和认识我的人，都有一个美好的前程！
我只愿自己，依然逆风飞扬，著就另一篇新的华章。
当然我知道，一切，
只靠我自己。
Another year has passed again, includingnd, with it, my most loved ones.
In 2022, I hope that the people I know and who know me have a bright future!
I only wish for myself, stillto continue flying against the wind, and makinge another great new chapter.
Instead of “make” you could also say “write” to keep the metaphor consistent with “chapter”
Of course, I know that only I can do / accomplish everything I needs to be done only by myself.
The original is technically fine, just a bit overlong. I’ve given an alternative translation!
Jan. 29, 2022
Thank you very much. The modified version is really nice.
Translation Practice
Another year has passed, again, including my most loved ons have some of my nearest and dearest.
2022, I hope thatwish people I know and who know me have a bright future!
I only wish for myself, stillto keep flying against the wind, and makingto write another great new chapter.
Of course, I know that everything needs tocan be done only by myself.
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Let's hope it's better than last year!
Jan. 29, 2022
Another year has passed, again, including my most loved ons have some of my nearest and dearest.
This means that your loved ones have died.
Jan. 29, 2022
Of course, I know that everything needs tocan be done only by myself.
Of course, I'm the only one who can make it happen.
Jan. 29, 2022
Thank you very much. The modified version is really nice.
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Another year has passed again, including my most loved ones. Another year has passed, a Another year has passed a |
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2022, I hope that people I know and who know me have a bright future! 2022, I In 2022, I hope that the people I know and who know me have a bright future! |
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I only wish for myself, still flying against the wind, and making another great new chapter. I only wish for myself, I only wish Instead of “make” you could also say “write” to keep the metaphor consistent with “chapter” |
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Of course, I know that everything needs to be done only by myself. Of course, I know that everything Of course, I know that only I can do / accomplish everything I need The original is technically fine, just a bit overlong. I’ve given an alternative translation! |
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