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Topic: 3 things that make you really happy

I think being happy is a kind of skill, not a matter of luck or chance. Knowing what makes me happy and having a good eye to find “little happiness” is practical for me to live happily. So this topic question itself actually makes me feel so.
My beloved dog named “Laki” makes me happy. I love to touch his fluffy hair and see his cute actions.
I like binge-watching dramas and animes and reading mangas. At the time, I can only focus on it and forget about everything. It gets me out of the real world, and I can charge energy.
Finally, I am relaxed when I am in nature, such as the sea, sky, green, wind, flowers. In my house, there is a garden( actually I didn’t care much, so it is like a little natural forest….). I enjoy the transformation of seasons by seeing colors of leaves, sounds of birds, tastes of vegetables and fruits, and smells of flowers. I appreciate an incredible nature. I also love discovering nature outside of my place by traveling to other countries.
Now, I am delighted because I could remember by writing my happiness. I will sleep well tonight.

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Topic: 3 things that make you really happy

I think being happy is a kind of skill, not a matter of luck or chance.

Knowing what makes me happy and having a good eye tofor finding “little happiness” is practicalnecessary for me to live happily.

So this topic question itself actually makes me feel so __.

unfinished?

My beloved dog named “Laki” makes me happy.

No need for quotation marks. Quotation marks are usually for titles of literary works, dialogue, or technical terms.

I love to touch his fluffy hair and see his cute actions.

I like binge-watching dramas and, animes, and reading mangas.

Anime and manga have the same singular and plural form.

At theis time, I can only focus on ithem and forget about everything.

It gets me out of the real world, and I can charge energyenergizes/invigorates me.

Finally, I am most relaxed when I am in nature, such as with the sea, sky, greenass, wind, or flowers.

In my house, there is a garden( (actually I didn’t careon't tend/maintain it much, so it is like a mini/little, natural forest….).

I enjoy the transformation of seasons by seeingwatching/seeing the seasons transform the colors of leaves, sounds of birds, tastes of vegetables and fruits, and smells of flowers.

I appreciate anhow incredible nature is.

I also love discovering nature outside of my place by traveling to other countries.

Now, I am delighted because I couldam remember by writing my happinessing past memories by writing about what happiness means to me.

I will sleep well tonight.

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Topic: 3 things that make you really happy

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think being happy is a kind of skill, not a matter of luck or chance.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Knowing what makes me happy and having a good eye to find “little happiness” is practical for me to live happily.

Knowing what makes me happy and having a good eye tofor finding “little happiness” is practicalnecessary for me to live happily.

So this topic question itself actually makes me feel so.

So this topic question itself actually makes me feel so __.

unfinished?

My beloved dog named “Laki” makes me happy.

My beloved dog named “Laki” makes me happy.

No need for quotation marks. Quotation marks are usually for titles of literary works, dialogue, or technical terms.

I love to touch his fluffy hair and see his cute actions.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I like binge-watching dramas and animes and reading mangas.

I like binge-watching dramas and, animes, and reading mangas.

Anime and manga have the same singular and plural form.

At the time, I can only focus on it and forget about everything.

At theis time, I can only focus on ithem and forget about everything.

It gets me out of the real world, and I can charge energy.

It gets me out of the real world, and I can charge energyenergizes/invigorates me.

Finally, I am relaxed when I am in nature, such as the sea, sky, green, wind, flowers.

Finally, I am most relaxed when I am in nature, such as with the sea, sky, greenass, wind, or flowers.

In my house, there is a garden( actually I didn’t care much, so it is like a little natural forest….).

In my house, there is a garden( (actually I didn’t careon't tend/maintain it much, so it is like a mini/little, natural forest….).

I enjoy the transformation of seasons by seeing colors of leaves, sounds of birds, tastes of vegetables and fruits, and smells of flowers.

I enjoy the transformation of seasons by seeingwatching/seeing the seasons transform the colors of leaves, sounds of birds, tastes of vegetables and fruits, and smells of flowers.

I appreciate an incredible nature.

I appreciate anhow incredible nature is.

I also love discovering nature outside of my place by traveling to other countries.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now, I am delighted because I could remember by writing my happiness.

Now, I am delighted because I couldam remember by writing my happinessing past memories by writing about what happiness means to me.

I will sleep well tonight.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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