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Pyppat

Jan. 7, 2025

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Too tired to elaborate

It's 3 am in my country and I can't sleep. Tomorrow(today actually) I'm going to start a new job it's in a Court of Justice and I'm feeling nervous. Is my second job, my first one was not a very good experience and this seems better. Actually is a internship, I'm too young to get a real job here. Is like a normal job but with reduced hours. Normally I'm very extrovert but in an environment frequented by older people I just got freeze.
Praying there's someone people like me there.


São 3 da manhã no meu país e eu não consigo dormir. Amanhã (ou melhor, hoje) eu vou começar um novo trabalho no Tribunal de Justiça, e estou me sentindo nervosa. Esse é o meu segundo trabalho, o primeiro não foi uma boa experiência, mas esse parece melhor. Na verdade, é um estágio, porque sou muito nova para ter um emprego de verdade aqui. É como um emprego comum, mas com horas reduzidas. Normalmente, sou bem extrovertida, mas em um ambiente majoritariamente frequentado por pessoas mais velhas, fico congelada. Rezando para que haja outras pessoas como eu lá.

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Tomorrow (today actually) I'm going to start a new job i. It's in a Court of Justice and I'm feeling nervous.

This feels more naturally like two sentences rather than one,

It is my second job, my first one was not a very good experience and this seems better.

Need to use it here. You need to indicate the subject of this sentence, by referring back to the previous one.

Actually it is a internship, I'm too young to get a real job here.

And here.

It is like a normal job but with reduced hours.

And here.

Normally I'm very extroverted but in an environment frequented by older people I just got freeze up.

Here, freezing up is something you do, rather than a state that you get.
You can say "Normally I'm an extrovert", but you can't say "Normally I'm very extrovert".
You could say "Normally I'm very extroverted" or "Normally I'm very much an extrovert",

Praying there's are someone people like me there.

"There's" is used for the singular (short for there is).
For a plural, you would use the two words "there are".
Someone is singular, but people are plural.
You could say "Praying there's someone like me there" (one person), or "Praying there are some people like me there" (one or more people), but you can't say "someone people".

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Good luck with the new job!

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Pyppat

Jan. 8, 2025

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Thank you for all the corrections!

Too tired to elaborate

It's 3 am in my country and I can't sleep.

Tomorrow (today, actually) I'm going to start a new job i. It's in a Court of Justice and I'm feeling nervous.

It's my second job, my first one was not. I didn't have a very good experience at my first one and this seems better.

Actually, it's an internship,. I'm too young to get a real job here.

It's like a normal job but with reduced hours.

Normally I'm very extroverted, but in an environment frequented by older people I just got freeze.

P(I'm) praying there's are someone people like me there.

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Pyppat

Jan. 8, 2025

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Thank you!

Tomorrow(later today actually) I'm going to start a new job i. It's in athe Court of Justice and I'm feeling nervous.

It's my second job, m. My first one was not a very good experience and this seems better.

Actually it's an internship,. I'm too young to get a real job here.

Ist's mostly like a normal job, but with reduced hours.

Normally, I'm very extroverted, but in an environment frequented bof mostly older people I just got freeze.

Praying there's someone people like me there.

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Good luck! You can do it!

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Pyppat

Jan. 8, 2025

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Thank you! :))

Too tired to elaborate

It's 3 am in my country and I can't sleep.

Tomorrow (today, actually), I'm going to start a new job i. It's in a Court of Justice and. I'm feeling nervous.

It's my second job, m. My first one was non't a very good experience and this one seems better.

AIt's actually is an internship,. I'm too young to get a real job here.

Ist's just like a normal job but with reduced hours.

Adding the word "just" emphasizes that it's really the same, except for what you are saying at the end (but with reduced hours).

Normally, I'm very extroverted, but in an environment frequented by older people, I just got freeze up.

PI'm praying there's someonat there will be people like me there.

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Pyppat

Jan. 8, 2025

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Thank you for the corrections!

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Too tired to elaborate

It's 3 am in my country and I can't sleep.

Tomorrow (today actually) I'm going to start a new job it's in a Court of Justice and I'm feeling nervous.

It's my second job, my first one was not. I didn't have a very good experience at my first one and this one seems better.

Actually it's a internship, because I'm too young to get a real job here.

It's like a normal job but with reduced hours.

Normally I'm very extroverted but in an environment frequented by older people I just got freeze.

Praying there's someone people like me there.

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Beleza! Boa sorte

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Pyppat

Jan. 8, 2025

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Thank you very much ;))

Too tired to elaborate


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It's 3 am in my country and I can't sleep.


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Tomorrow(today actually) I'm going to start a new job it's in a Court of Justice and I'm feeling nervous.


Tomorrow (today actually) I'm going to start a new job it's in a Court of Justice and I'm feeling nervous.

Tomorrow (today, actually), I'm going to start a new job i. It's in a Court of Justice and. I'm feeling nervous.

Tomorrow(later today actually) I'm going to start a new job i. It's in athe Court of Justice and I'm feeling nervous.

Tomorrow (today, actually) I'm going to start a new job i. It's in a Court of Justice and I'm feeling nervous.

Tomorrow (today actually) I'm going to start a new job i. It's in a Court of Justice and I'm feeling nervous.

This feels more naturally like two sentences rather than one,

Is my second job, my first one was not a very good experience and this seems better.


It's my second job, my first one was not. I didn't have a very good experience at my first one and this one seems better.

It's my second job, m. My first one was non't a very good experience and this one seems better.

It's my second job, m. My first one was not a very good experience and this seems better.

It's my second job, my first one was not. I didn't have a very good experience at my first one and this seems better.

It is my second job, my first one was not a very good experience and this seems better.

Need to use it here. You need to indicate the subject of this sentence, by referring back to the previous one.

Actually is a internship, I'm too young to get a real job here.


Actually it's a internship, because I'm too young to get a real job here.

AIt's actually is an internship,. I'm too young to get a real job here.

Actually it's an internship,. I'm too young to get a real job here.

Actually, it's an internship,. I'm too young to get a real job here.

Actually it is a internship, I'm too young to get a real job here.

And here.

Is like a normal job but with reduced hours.


It's like a normal job but with reduced hours.

Ist's just like a normal job but with reduced hours.

Adding the word "just" emphasizes that it's really the same, except for what you are saying at the end (but with reduced hours).

Ist's mostly like a normal job, but with reduced hours.

It's like a normal job but with reduced hours.

It is like a normal job but with reduced hours.

And here.

Normally I'm very extrovert but in an environment frequented by older people I just got freeze.


Normally I'm very extroverted but in an environment frequented by older people I just got freeze.

Normally, I'm very extroverted, but in an environment frequented by older people, I just got freeze up.

Normally, I'm very extroverted, but in an environment frequented bof mostly older people I just got freeze.

Normally I'm very extroverted, but in an environment frequented by older people I just got freeze.

Normally I'm very extroverted but in an environment frequented by older people I just got freeze up.

Here, freezing up is something you do, rather than a state that you get. You can say "Normally I'm an extrovert", but you can't say "Normally I'm very extrovert". You could say "Normally I'm very extroverted" or "Normally I'm very much an extrovert",

Praying there's someone people like me there.


Praying there's someone people like me there.

PI'm praying there's someonat there will be people like me there.

Praying there's someone people like me there.

P(I'm) praying there's are someone people like me there.

Praying there's are someone people like me there.

"There's" is used for the singular (short for there is). For a plural, you would use the two words "there are". Someone is singular, but people are plural. You could say "Praying there's someone like me there" (one person), or "Praying there are some people like me there" (one or more people), but you can't say "someone people".

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