June 6, 2021
Too Sunny Day
It is almost the summer weather today.
The temperature was more than 30 Celsius degrees at noon.
My family members have continually been drinking a lot of water today.
I bring all fans up from the warehouse and I set them each room.
Without the fans, the hot weather makes my sons feel tired and annoyed.
I should buy many ice creams to overcome this summer with my sons.
Too Sunny Day
It is almost the summer weather today.
Summer is definite on its own, you don't need to say "the" before summer.
The temperature was more than 30 Celsius degreedegrees Celsius at noon.
It's (number) degrees (scale).
My family members have been continually been drinking a lot of water today.
I bring allought up all of the fans up from the warehouse and I set them in each room.
You already did it so it is past tense, not present.
Without the fans, the hot weather makes my sons feel tired and annoyed.
I should buy many ice creams to overcome this summer with my sons.
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June 7, 2021
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Too Sunny Day This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is almost the summer weather today. It is almost Summer is definite on its own, you don't need to say "the" before summer. |
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The temperature was more than 30 Celsius degrees at noon. The temperature was more than 30 It's (number) degrees (scale). |
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My family members have continually been drinking a lot of water today. My family members have been continually |
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I bring all fans up from the warehouse and I set them each room. I br You already did it so it is past tense, not present. |
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Without the fans, the hot weather makes my sons feel tired and annoyed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I should buy many ice creams to overcome this summer with my sons. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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