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Tongji Weir

Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4

It has some views near a weir built 1500 years ago. I enjoyed the views very much. They were more beautiful in my eyes than in the video. I hope one day you guys can see them by yourself.

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore. It is old and somewhat worn, but it still maintains a sense of dignity. Because in the temple, the person who built this weir is enshrined, and the people who repaired it throughout history are introduced and commemorated.

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Tongji Weir

Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4 It has some views near a weir built 1500 years ago.

I enjoyed the views very much.

They were more beautiful in my eyes than in the video.

I hope one day you guys canget to see them by yourself.

Another way to put it

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore.

It is old and somewhat worn, but it still maintains a sense of dignity.

Because in the temple, the person who built this weir is enshrined, and the people who repaired it throughout history are introduced and commemorated.

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I learnt a new word today.

Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4


It
hashows some viewplaces near a weir built 1500 years ago.

'it has some views' is not wrong but a very unusual phrase and hard to get the meaning

I enjoyed the views very much.

here you can use views

They were more beautiful in my eyesreal life than in the video.

I hope one day you guys can see them byfor yourself.

'by yourself' would mean alone

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore.

It is old and somewhat worn, but it still maintains a sense of dignity.

Because in the temple, the person who built this weir is enshrined, and the people who repaired it throughout history are introducmentioned and commemorated.

'introduced' is not wrong but not what a native would say.

Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4


It
hashows some views near a weir built 1500 years ago.

I enjoyed the views very much.

They were more beautiful in my eyesperson than in the video.

I hope one day you guys can see them byfor yourself.

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore.

It is old and somewhat worn, but it still maintains a sense of dignity.

Because in the temple, tThe person who built this weir is enshrined, in the temple and other people who have repaired ithe temple throughout history are introduced and commemorated there.

Tongji Weir

Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4


It
hashows {some views | some scenes | the view} near a weir built 1500 years ago.

I enjoyed the views very much.

You could say “I enjoyed these views,” but singular “view” is more natural given the context.

They were more beautiful in my eyes than in the video.

I hope one day you guys can see them by(for) yourself.

“See them by yourself” means you would do it alone, either unaccompanied or without assistance.

“See them for yourself” and “see them yourself” are pretty much the same in this context, although the latter could imply “see and evaluate/judge them yourself.”

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore.

It is old and somewhat worrun down, but it still maintains a sense of dignity.

Because in the temple,This is because the person who built this weir is enshrined, in the temple and the people who repaired it throughout history are introduced and commemorated.

Your original sentence was incomplete (it lacked a main verb, so I added “this is,” even though it’s a bit clumsy. A better solution would be to combine this sentence with the previous one.

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What a beautiful video! I love the way the water “bends” smoothly over the dam before it turns frothy. And the natural soundscape in the background is very nice. ❤️❤️

The stonework on the weir is impressive—it looks like all the stones have been fitted together perfectly. The stonemasons who maintained this over the centuries must have been highly skilled.

Tongji Weir


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Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4 It has some views near a weir built 1500 years ago.


Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4


It
hashows {some views | some scenes | the view} near a weir built 1500 years ago.

Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4


It
hashows some viewplaces near a weir built 1500 years ago.

'it has some views' is not wrong but a very unusual phrase and hard to get the meaning

Yesterday I uploaded another video: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/GanBmJ5ptR4


It
hashows some views near a weir built 1500 years ago.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I enjoyed the views very much.


I enjoyed the views very much.

You could say “I enjoyed these views,” but singular “view” is more natural given the context.

I enjoyed the views very much.

here you can use views

I enjoyed the views very much.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They were more beautiful in my eyes than in the video.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They were more beautiful in my eyesreal life than in the video.

They were more beautiful in my eyesperson than in the video.

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I hope one day you guys can see them by yourself.


I hope one day you guys can see them by(for) yourself.

“See them by yourself” means you would do it alone, either unaccompanied or without assistance. “See them for yourself” and “see them yourself” are pretty much the same in this context, although the latter could imply “see and evaluate/judge them yourself.”

I hope one day you guys can see them byfor yourself.

'by yourself' would mean alone

I hope one day you guys can see them byfor yourself.

I hope one day you guys canget to see them by yourself.

Another way to put it

There's also a small temple near the weir on the shore.


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It is old and somewhat worn, but it still maintains a sense of dignity.


It is old and somewhat worrun down, but it still maintains a sense of dignity.

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Because in the temple, the person who built this weir is enshrined, and the people who repaired it throughout history are introduced and commemorated.


Because in the temple,This is because the person who built this weir is enshrined, in the temple and the people who repaired it throughout history are introduced and commemorated.

Your original sentence was incomplete (it lacked a main verb, so I added “this is,” even though it’s a bit clumsy. A better solution would be to combine this sentence with the previous one.

Because in the temple, the person who built this weir is enshrined, and the people who repaired it throughout history are introducmentioned and commemorated.

'introduced' is not wrong but not what a native would say.

Because in the temple, tThe person who built this weir is enshrined, in the temple and other people who have repaired ithe temple throughout history are introduced and commemorated there.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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