Sept. 17, 2025
Today’s work
I just work today, furthermore, I only work part-time job throughout this summer vacation. It’s way too sad I didn’t do anything summery like pool and barbecue but I’m a sophomore.
By the way, I’ve read on the Internet, is it true that this expression how delicious, native speaker feel old-fashioned? If so I’m shocked cause I used it in previous text.
今日も仕事しかしてない。もっと言えばこの夏休みはバイトしかしてない。プールとかバーベキューとか夏休みっぽいこと何もしてないとか悲しすぎる！大学2年生なのに！
ていうか how deliciousって表現はネイティブからすると古いって感じるってまじ？もしそうなら一個前の文書で使っちゃったからショック！
I just work today, furthermore, I only work part-time job throughout this summer vacationAll I did was work today. Infact, all I've done this summer break is work part-time.
It’s way too sad I didn’t do anything summery like pool and barbecue but I’m a sophomore.
I'm so sad I didn't get to do anything summery like going to the pool or having a barbecue. I'm literally a sophomore!
By the way, I’ve read on the Iinternet, is it true that that native speakers find thise expression "how delicious, native speaker feel" old- fashioned. Is that true?
If so I’m shocked cause I used it in previous text.
If so, I'm shocked because I used it in the previous text.
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Your piece is very interesting, but the first few times I read your text, it didn't quite make sense 😅 It seemed like you jumped from one idea to another. The main problem is a lack of punctuation. Learn how to use , . ? ! - and I think your writing will improve drastically! 😄
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Today’s work |
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I just work today, furthermore, I only work part-time job throughout this summer vacation.
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It’s way too sad I didn’t do anything summery like pool and barbecue but I’m a sophomore. It’s way too sad I didn’t do anything summery like pool and barbecue but I’m a sophomore. I'm so sad I didn't get to do anything summery like going to the pool or having a barbecue. I'm literally a sophomore! |
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By the way, I’ve read on the Internet, is it true that this expression how delicious, native speaker feel old-fashioned? By the way, I |
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If so I’m shocked cause I used it in previous text. If so I’m shocked cause I used it in previous text. If so, I'm shocked because I used it in the previous text. |
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