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April 16, 2025

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I read a passage on the difference of diets between the poor and the affluent.Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor.However,the reality is more likely to be there no remarkable difference of food knowledge between the poor and the affluent and the determinant of food security is the food price.

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I read a passage on the difference of diets between the poor and the affluent. Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor. However, the reality is more likely to be theat there are no remarkable difference of food knowledge between the poor and the affluent and the determinant of food security is the food price.

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Great job. Just put a space after punctuation.

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April 16, 2025

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I read a passage on the difference ofin diets between the poor and the affluent. Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor. However, the reality is more likely to be thereat there is no remarkable difference ofbetween the food knowledge betweenof the poor and the affluent, and the determinant of food security is the food price.

I would say 'difference in' would be the more normal expression. No 'the' in front of 'limited food skills' it is not a specific 'limited food skills' that you are drawing attention to. Must a space after a full-stop and comma. Use 'that' after 'the reality is more likely to be' to introduce the next clause.

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Good work.

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April 16, 2025

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April 17, 2025

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I have a question.Can I use word-formation like"energy-dense"? I found that in a passage.Can I use "knowledge-poor","time-limited" and"appearance-beautiful"?

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April 17, 2025

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Depends on the context and the words you are trying to put together. They are often used to modify adjectives to show that the modifier is a single thing e.g. a light-green dress. "energy-dense", "knowledge-poor" and "time-limited" make sense, but although I understand what "appearance-beautiful" means, it is not something someone would say, they would probably say "beautiful-looking" instead.

There is a brief guide to them here:
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/compounds

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lonely

April 17, 2025

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Thank you for your explanation! I have learned a lot from it

I read a passage on the difference of diets betweenbetween diets of the poor andversus the affluent. Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills of the poor leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor.s. However, the reality is more likely to be thereat there is no remarkable difference of food knowledge between the poor and the affluent, and the determinant of food security is the food price.

Couple changes here to make the sentences flow more naturally but overall it was very easy to understand

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It seems like langcorrect interpreted all your text as one sentence. Maybe because there isn't a space after your periods ? Anyway nice work !

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lonely

April 16, 2025

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I read a passage on the difference of diets between the poor and the affluent. Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor. However, the reality is more likely to be that there no remarkable differences of food knowledge between the poor and the affluent and the determinant of food security is the food price.

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Well done!

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April 16, 2025

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I read a passage on the difference of diets between the poor and the affluent.Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor.However,the reality is more likely to be there no remarkable difference of food knowledge between the poor and the affluent and the determinant of food security is the food price.


I read a passage on the difference of diets between the poor and the affluent. Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor. However, the reality is more likely to be that there no remarkable differences of food knowledge between the poor and the affluent and the determinant of food security is the food price.

I read a passage on the difference of diets betweenbetween diets of the poor andversus the affluent. Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills of the poor leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor.s. However, the reality is more likely to be thereat there is no remarkable difference of food knowledge between the poor and the affluent, and the determinant of food security is the food price.

Couple changes here to make the sentences flow more naturally but overall it was very easy to understand

I read a passage on the difference ofin diets between the poor and the affluent. Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor. However, the reality is more likely to be thereat there is no remarkable difference ofbetween the food knowledge betweenof the poor and the affluent, and the determinant of food security is the food price.

I would say 'difference in' would be the more normal expression. No 'the' in front of 'limited food skills' it is not a specific 'limited food skills' that you are drawing attention to. Must a space after a full-stop and comma. Use 'that' after 'the reality is more likely to be' to introduce the next clause.

I read a passage on the difference of diets between the poor and the affluent. Extensive research suggested that the limited food skills leads to the nutrition-poor dietary of the poor. However, the reality is more likely to be theat there are no remarkable difference of food knowledge between the poor and the affluent and the determinant of food security is the food price.

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