Today's dDiary

I published my first passage yesterday. At first, I thought no one would noticed it, but I received very careful corrections and kind encouragement,which made me raise up and inspir. This made inspired and uplifted. Thank you!

I woke up in theis afternoon today,because last night I listened a late audio drama too late. I felt really hungry, so I quickly went to thea canteen/cafeteria to have something to eat. I had malatang (麻辣烫) today. I don't know how to say that in English.In sort,it's a delicious food.

PUNCTUATION: Remember to add a blank after periods and question marks.
行文：记得在句号和问号后加空白。
British & Australian English: canteen / North American English: cafeteria

You can pick up what you would like to eat and put it in a big plastic basin, then give theit to a waiter to cook it.

After I finisheding my lunch, I walked to my dormitory. And I found the fruit shop next to our dormitory started to sale watermelons, which isare my favorite fruit. So I bought one, which it coast me 14rmb! I thought it was a lbittle expaensive because it was sonly half and small. As usual, I can buy a big whole one and pay 10rmb in June and July...... ¶
Now,i I'm scooping watermelon and typing, I feel cozy and relaxed.

I published my first passage yesterday. At first, I thought no one would noticed it, but I received very careful corrections and kind encouragement, which made me raise up and inspired.inspired and elevated my spirits. Thank you!

Every word after any punctuation (, . ? ; :) gets a space in English.

"made me raise up" doesn't make sense in English because "raise up" can be applied to more things than just your "spirits/feelings," so you have to explicitly say what is being "raised up"

I woke up in the afternoon today, because last night I listened audio drama too late. last night. I felt really hungry so I quickly went to the canteenfeteria to have something to eat. I had 麻辣烫 today. I don't know how to say that in English. In short, it's a delicious food.

Though "canteen" is correct, it's not really ever used in English. The words we might use are "cafeteria," or "mess hall" (less common).

The phrase is "In short," instead of "In sort." It's a shorter way of saying "To explain in a short amount of detail" (Which ironically take a lot of words to say itself).

You can pick up what you likewant to eat and put it in a big plastic basin, then give it to the waiter to cook it.

After I finished my lunch, I walked to dormitory.A and I found out that the fruit shop next to our dormitory started to saleell watermelon, which is my favorite fruit.! So I bought one, and it coast me 14 rmb! I thought it was a little expaensive cause it was only half and small.As usmall and only half of one. Usually, I can buy a big whole big one and pay 10 rmb in June and July...... ¶
Now,i I'm scooping watermelon and typing, I feel cozy and relaxed.

There were a lot of homonyms in here (words that sound the same but have a different meaning). Let me go through them all.

sale -> sell (sale is when an item in a shop is already being sold, but now it "goes on sale" for a cheaper price).

coast -> cost (coast has several different meaning based on context, it either means the connection between land and an ocean, or it goes in a saying "to coast through <task>" where <task> can be one of "life," "work," "class," etc. and means that "it is very easy to do the <task>")

expansive -> expensive (expansive means "very big," or "very wide")

I published my first passage yesterday. At first, I thought no one would noticed it, but I received very careful correction and kind encouragement, which made me raise upraised my spirits and inspired. me. Thank you!

Today I woke up in the afternoon today, because last night I stayed up late listeneding to audio drama too late.s. I felt really hungry so I quickly went to the canteen to have something to eat. I had 麻辣烫 today.(Malatang). I don't know how to say that in English.In sort,it's a Just imagine something delicious food.

You can pick up what you would like to eat and put it in a big plastic basin, then give it to the waiter to cook it.

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Now,i I'm scooping watermelon andwhilst typing,. I feel cozy and relaxed.