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marianaof03

July 25, 2023

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Today, I'm very lazy

Usually, I work all day, 8 am to 6 pm, but the work was so boring because the apps are finished and the tester was testing the app. Then, I saw some corrections but I think it is not true because I can not see these errors. I told my leader and she said: Ok, tell her that she could prove the app on different mobiles phone because she would not prove it in only one.
Around 4 pm, the tester told me that she could prove the app tomorrow because she has no other mobile phone. Then, I do not do anything in my work, I want to take in my bed and watch videos or chat. Although, I study nothing! and I feel really bad because I try to practice every day my English but today I am very lazy.
Now, I practice writing this text in 7 minutes and the time is over!
Good night!

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Today, I'm vVery lLazy Today

Usually, I work all day, from 8 am to 6 pm, but the; however, today work was so boring because the apps are finished and the tester was testing the appbeing tested.

Then,I thought I saw some corrections, but I think it is not truedon't think so now because I canould not see these errors.

I told my leader about them and she said: , "Ok, tell her [that she could provee tester] to check the app on different mobiles phone because she would not prove it in onlyphones and not just check it on one".

Around 4 pm, the tester told me that she could provecheck the app tomorrow because she has no other mobile phonedidn't have another phone with her.

ThenAfter, I do noidn't do anything in of my work,. I wanted to take ingo to my bed and watch videos or chat with people.

Although, I study noHowever, I didn't end up studying anything!

aAnd I feel really bad because I try to practice every day my English every day, but today I am feeling very lazy.

Now, I am practiceing writing by writing this text infor 7 minutes and the time is now over!

Good night!

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Great job! Just a few corrections!

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marianaof03

July 25, 2023

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Thank you!

Today, I'm very lazy

"I've been very lazy" or "I feel very lazy" are probably more typical native constructions

Then, I saw some corrections but I think it isthey are not true because I can not see these errors.

"These errors" should refer back to previously mentioned errors. It's the first time you're mentioning it, so "the errors" is correct.

I told my leader and she said: Ok, tell her that she could provetest the app on different mobiles phones because she would not provetest it in only one.

I'm not sure what word you're looking for, either test or approve, but definitely not prove. Even fixing that word, I don't know exactly what's going on here.

Around 4 pm, the tester told me that she could provecheck the app tomorrow because she has no other mobile phone.

another possibility

Then, I doid not do anything in my work, I want to takeget in my bed and watch videos or chat.

or maybe you mean "I will not"

Although, I study nothing!

This us of "although" is a little strange; probably you meant "even so" or "and yet"

and I feel really bad because I try to practice every day my English every day but today I amhave been very lazy.

best if the direct object comes right after the verb in this sentence

Now, I've practiced writing this text in 7 minutes and the time is over!

Today, I'm very lazy


Today, I'm very lazy

"I've been very lazy" or "I feel very lazy" are probably more typical native constructions

Today, I'm vVery lLazy Today

Usually, I work all day, 8 am to 6 pm, but the work was so boring because the apps are finished and the tester was testing the app.


Usually, I work all day, from 8 am to 6 pm, but the; however, today work was so boring because the apps are finished and the tester was testing the appbeing tested.

Then, I saw some corrections but I think it is not true because I can not see these errors.


Then, I saw some corrections but I think it isthey are not true because I can not see these errors.

"These errors" should refer back to previously mentioned errors. It's the first time you're mentioning it, so "the errors" is correct.

Then,I thought I saw some corrections, but I think it is not truedon't think so now because I canould not see these errors.

I told my leader and she said: Ok, tell her that she could prove the app on different mobiles phone because she would not prove it in only one.


I told my leader and she said: Ok, tell her that she could provetest the app on different mobiles phones because she would not provetest it in only one.

I'm not sure what word you're looking for, either test or approve, but definitely not prove. Even fixing that word, I don't know exactly what's going on here.

I told my leader about them and she said: , "Ok, tell her [that she could provee tester] to check the app on different mobiles phone because she would not prove it in onlyphones and not just check it on one".

Around 4 pm, the tester told me that she could prove the app tomorrow because she has no other mobile phone.


Around 4 pm, the tester told me that she could provecheck the app tomorrow because she has no other mobile phone.

another possibility

Around 4 pm, the tester told me that she could provecheck the app tomorrow because she has no other mobile phonedidn't have another phone with her.

Then, I do not do anything in my work, I want to take in my bed and watch videos or chat.


Then, I doid not do anything in my work, I want to takeget in my bed and watch videos or chat.

or maybe you mean "I will not"

ThenAfter, I do noidn't do anything in of my work,. I wanted to take ingo to my bed and watch videos or chat with people.

Although, I study nothing!


Although, I study nothing!

This us of "although" is a little strange; probably you meant "even so" or "and yet"

Although, I study noHowever, I didn't end up studying anything!

and I feel really bad because I try to practice every day my English but today I am very lazy.


and I feel really bad because I try to practice every day my English every day but today I amhave been very lazy.

best if the direct object comes right after the verb in this sentence

aAnd I feel really bad because I try to practice every day my English every day, but today I am feeling very lazy.

Now, I practice writing this text in 7 minutes and the time is over!


Now, I've practiced writing this text in 7 minutes and the time is over!

Now, I am practiceing writing by writing this text infor 7 minutes and the time is now over!

Good night!


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