May 19, 2021
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I had woken up at 8 o'clock today when my mother came in. She said that the electricity was cut off. The weather wasn't nice. It was cloudy and pouring outside. I should admit it wasn't a big surprise that they decided to cut off the power. It happens frequently when the weather is stormy. Luckily I had the opportunity to cancel my English class since my mobile Internet was slow, but enough to send a message.
Today
I had woken up at 8 o'clock today when my mother came in.
She said that the electricity was cut off.
The weather wasn't nice.
It was cloudy and pouring outside.
I should admitTherefore, it wasn't a big surprise that they decided to cut off the power.
I think this sounds nicer, especially because it connects this sentence with what you wrote earlier.
It happens frequently when the weather is stormybad.
You can say "the weather is stormy", but saying "the weather is bad" is way more typical.
Luckily I had the opportunity to cancel my English class sinceAlthough my mobile Iinternet was slow, buit was fast enough to send a message, so luckily, I had the opportunity to cancel my English lesson.
I hope I understood what you wanted to say :) I changed the sentence to convey your message in a clearer way.
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She said that the electricity was cut off. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The weather wasn't nice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was cloudy and pouring outside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I should admit it wasn't a big surprise that they decided to cut off the power.
I think this sounds nicer, especially because it connects this sentence with what you wrote earlier. |
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It happens frequently when the weather is stormy. It happens frequently when the weather is You can say "the weather is stormy", but saying "the weather is bad" is way more typical. |
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Luckily I had the opportunity to cancel my English class since my mobile Internet was slow, but enough to send a message.
I hope I understood what you wanted to say :) I changed the sentence to convey your message in a clearer way. |
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