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Haniyee

April 18, 2025

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Im happy today, because after 2 weeks, i met my husband. It was amazing. We had a lot of fun together, we eat a lot of things, and very delicious cookies, he loved it. I decided to buy more for him and take for him 2 weeks later, we hugged each other a lot, before that, i was so mad person, but now; i am happy

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Im happy today, because after 2 weeks, iI met my husband.

It was amazing.

Technically correct but you can include this in the first sentence.

We had a lot of fun together, we eate a lot of things, and verysome delicious cookies, h. He loved it.

Past Tense

I decided to buy more for him and take for him 2 weeks later, we hugged each other a lot, b. Before that, iI was soa mad person, but now; i I am happy.

What does "for him " mean?

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Good!

I'm happy today, because after 2 weeks, i met my husbandI have meet my husband after 2 weeks of not seeing each other.

We had a lot of fun together, we eat a lot of things, andlike very delicious cookies, he loved it.

I decided to buy more cookies for him and take forthem to him 2 weeks later, w. We hugged each other a lot, b. Before that, iI was so mad person,a very mad but now; i I am happy

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Sounds like a emotional and wholesome meetup! Very nice text

Im happy today, because a! After 2two weeks, i met apart, I saw my husband.

We had a lot of fun together, w. We eat a lot of things, ande very delicious cookies, h. He loved it.

I decided to buy more cookies for him and take for him 2 weeks later, we hugged each other a lot, before that, i was so mad person, but now; ibring them for him in two weeks. We hugged each other a lot. Now I am happy.

Today


Im happy today, because after 2 weeks, i met my husband.


Im happy today, because a! After 2two weeks, i met apart, I saw my husband.

I'm happy today, because after 2 weeks, i met my husbandI have meet my husband after 2 weeks of not seeing each other.

Im happy today, because after 2 weeks, iI met my husband.

It was amazing.


It was amazing.

Technically correct but you can include this in the first sentence.

We had a lot of fun together, we eat a lot of things, and very delicious cookies, he loved it.


We had a lot of fun together, w. We eat a lot of things, ande very delicious cookies, h. He loved it.

We had a lot of fun together, we eat a lot of things, andlike very delicious cookies, he loved it.

We had a lot of fun together, we eate a lot of things, and verysome delicious cookies, h. He loved it.

Past Tense

I decided to buy more for him and take for him 2 weeks later, we hugged each other a lot, before that, i was so mad person, but now; i am happy


I decided to buy more cookies for him and take for him 2 weeks later, we hugged each other a lot, before that, i was so mad person, but now; ibring them for him in two weeks. We hugged each other a lot. Now I am happy.

I decided to buy more cookies for him and take forthem to him 2 weeks later, w. We hugged each other a lot, b. Before that, iI was so mad person,a very mad but now; i I am happy

I decided to buy more for him and take for him 2 weeks later, we hugged each other a lot, b. Before that, iI was soa mad person, but now; i I am happy.

What does "for him " mean?

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