Oct. 29, 2025
“To Love Like That”
“To Love Like That”
Could I ever love a person
the way I love you—
without wanting,
without asking,
without the fear of being unseen?
You never promise,
never pretend,
yet your breath fills
the empty corners of my heart.
If I could love a human
as I love a cat,
perhaps heaven
would no longer be distant—
but quietly asleep
on my lap.
人を愛せるだろうか
あなたを愛するように——
求めず、
願わず、
見捨てられることを恐れず
あなたは約束をしない
偽ることもしない
それでもあなたの息づかいが
私の心のすきまを満たしていく
もし人を
猫を愛するように愛せたなら
天国はもう
遠い場所ではなくなるだろう——
ただ静かに
私の膝の上で眠っている
“To Love Like That”
“To Love Like That”
Could I ever love a person,
the way I love you—?
without wanting,
without asking,
without the fear of being unseen?
You never promise,
never pretend,
yet your breath fills
the empty corners of my heart.
If I could love a human
as I love a cat,
perhaps heaven
would no longer be distant—
but quietly asleep
on my lap.
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Beautiful poetry, keep it up :)
Oct. 31, 2025
Thank you very much!
“To Love Like That”
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“To Love Like That”
Could I ever love a person
the way I love you—
without wanting,
without asking,
without the fear of being unseen?
You never promise,
never pretend,
yet your breath fills
the empty corners of my heart.
If I could love a human
as I love a cat,
perhaps heaven
would no longer be distant—
but quietly asleep
on my lap.
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What a lovely poem. Thank you for sharing it!
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