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AikawaMizore

May 18, 2021

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to avoid ''Avoidance''

Using only familiar expressions is easier even if it looks perfect by others.
Immediate interaction with using them might be enough to facilitate talking.
But for the next trajectory to go ahead, sometimes it is not attitude to be preferred.
Using new expressions, experimental or adventurous ones are more thrilling and beneficial.

Being fluent and automation of wording are often viewed as ideals for language learners.
But I have a different view on it. Without awareness and contemplation before uttering and with prioritizing fluency or perfectness , one tends to go into circle of repetition with less progress and risk.
It is beautiful on the surface, and one might be praised by others because of the perfectness and fluency.
But that is a fragile house of cards. To say nothing of tornado, a momentary gust or even exhalation of someone is much enough to dabacle.
Thus sometimes one has to break one's internal limitation apart and accept shame stemmed from making faults or immature misunderstanding.

Meanwhile, I arrived here today where people can correct each other without excessive hesitation as far as abiding by the minimum rule.
This will enable us to avoid Avoidance which is often used among us whether conscious or not to avoid being uncomfortable because of out of routine.
That is why there seems to be no room of doubt that this website is a must or an enabler for most of sincere learners of language that they seek to obtain.

Thank you for reading. Enough for today.

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tTo avoid ''Avoidance''

Using only familiar expressions is easier even if it looks perfect by others.

Using expressions you are familiar with is easy and it looks perfect to others.

Immediate interaction with using them might be enough to facilitate talking.

Using these expressions might even be enough to facilitate speaking.

But for the next trajectory to go ahead, sometimes it is not attitude to be preferred.

But to continue making progress, sometimes playing it safe is not the right attitude.

Using new expressions, -- experimental or adventurous ones are-- is more thrilling and beneficial.

Using new words, especially adventurous ones, is thrilling and can be beneficial to learning a language.

Being fluent and automation of wording are often viewed as ideals for language learners.

Being fluent and conversing naturally, without translating, is often viewed as the ideal for language learners.

But I have a different view on it.

Without awareness and contemplation before uttering and with prioritizing fluency or perfectness , one tends to go into circle of repetition with less progress and risk.

Without thinking before you speak and by prioritising fluency and perfection, one tends to enter a cycle of repetition without progress, although also without risk.

It is beautiful on the surface, and one might be praised by others because of theone's perfectnession and fluency.

But that is a fragile house of cards.

To say nothing ofA tornado, a momentary gust, or even an exhalation of someone is much enough to dabacleis enough to bring the house down.

Thus sometimes one has to break one's internal limitation aparts and accept the potential shame stemmeding from making faults or immaturemistakes and misunderstandings.

Meanwhile, I arrived here today where people can correct each other without excessive hesitation as far ashesitation, so long as they abidinge by the minimum rules.

This will enable us to avoid Avoidance which is often used amongby us, whether conscious or not, to avoid being uncomfortable because ofwe are out of routiour comfort zone.

That is why there seems to be no room ofor doubt that this website is a must or an enableras a tool for the most of sincere learners of language that they seek to obtain.

Thank you for reading.

Enough for today.

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I see what you're doing here in using advanced vocabulary and commend your efforts, but I think you lose a little in conveying your meaning in using this kind of language. I have made some suggestions for how you could say these things in a more natural way, and often in simpler words. Congratulations on working to push your boundaries :)

AikawaMizore's avatar
AikawaMizore

May 18, 2021

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I can learn a lot from your review. Thank you very much. I have been kind of a collector of words because I like it, but when it comes to using them, I am totally a layman. So your polite correction is very helpful.

to avoid ''Avoidance''


tTo avoid ''Avoidance''

Using only familiar expressions is easier even if it looks perfect by others.


Using only familiar expressions is easier even if it looks perfect by others.

Using expressions you are familiar with is easy and it looks perfect to others.

Immediate interaction with using them might be enough to facilitate talking.


Immediate interaction with using them might be enough to facilitate talking.

Using these expressions might even be enough to facilitate speaking.

But for the next trajectory to go ahead, sometimes it is not attitude to be preferred.


But for the next trajectory to go ahead, sometimes it is not attitude to be preferred.

But to continue making progress, sometimes playing it safe is not the right attitude.

Using new expressions, experimental or adventurous ones are more thrilling and beneficial.


Using new expressions, -- experimental or adventurous ones are-- is more thrilling and beneficial.

Using new words, especially adventurous ones, is thrilling and can be beneficial to learning a language.

Being fluent and automation of wording are often viewed as ideals for language learners.


Being fluent and automation of wording are often viewed as ideals for language learners.

Being fluent and conversing naturally, without translating, is often viewed as the ideal for language learners.

But I have a different view on it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Without awareness and contemplation before uttering and with prioritizing fluency or perfectness , one tends to go into circle of repetition with less progress and risk.


Without awareness and contemplation before uttering and with prioritizing fluency or perfectness , one tends to go into circle of repetition with less progress and risk.

Without thinking before you speak and by prioritising fluency and perfection, one tends to enter a cycle of repetition without progress, although also without risk.

It is beautiful on the surface, and one might be praised by others because of the perfectness and fluency.


It is beautiful on the surface, and one might be praised by others because of theone's perfectnession and fluency.

But that is a fragile house of cards.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To say nothing of tornado, a momentary gust or even exhale of someone is much enough to dabacle.


Thus sometimes one has to break one's internal limitation apart and accept shame stemmed from making faults or immature misunderstanding.


Thus sometimes one has to break one's internal limitation aparts and accept the potential shame stemmeding from making faults or immaturemistakes and misunderstandings.

Meanwhile, I arrived here today where people can correct each other without excessive hesitation as far as abiding by the minimum rule.


Meanwhile, I arrived here today where people can correct each other without excessive hesitation as far ashesitation, so long as they abidinge by the minimum rules.

This will enable us to avoid Avoidance which is often used among us whether conscious or not to avoid being uncomfortable because of out of routine.


This will enable us to avoid Avoidance which is often used amongby us, whether conscious or not, to avoid being uncomfortable because ofwe are out of routiour comfort zone.

That is why there seems to be no room of doubt that this website is a must or a enabler for most of sincere learners of language that they seek to obtain.


Thank you for reading.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Enough for today.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To say nothing of tornado, a momentary gust or even exhalation of someone is much enough to dabacle.


To say nothing ofA tornado, a momentary gust, or even an exhalation of someone is much enough to dabacleis enough to bring the house down.

That is why there seems to be no room of doubt that this website is a must or an enabler for most of sincere learners of language that they seek to obtain.


That is why there seems to be no room ofor doubt that this website is a must or an enableras a tool for the most of sincere learners of language that they seek to obtain.

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