May 9, 2026
This summer I took a river cruise with my dad in Melbourne. I made a really big mistake: I forgot to bring my sun hat, and I didn't put on sunscreen because it had been cloudy the past few days. It was a sunny day and my face started to sting in less than an hour. I put on aloe vera gel every day for the next few days, and it still took about four or five days to recover.
This summer, I took a river cruise with my dad in Melbourne. This summer, I took a river cruise with my dad in Melbourne.
I made athe really big mistake: I of forgotetting to bring my sun hat, andAND I didn't put on sunscreen because it had been cloudy the past few days.
I made the really big mistake of forgetting to bring my sun hat, AND I didn't put on sunscreen because it had been cloudy the past few days.
The "and" does not need to be capitalized here, I just did that for emphasis.
I put on aloe vera gel every day for the next few days, andFor next few days after, I wore aloe vera gel, and even then it still took about four or five days to recover.
For next few days after, I wore aloe vera gel, and even then it still took about four or five days to recover.
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Sunburns suck
Hopefully you'll remember to wear sunscreen even if it's cloudy outside
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This summer I took a river cruise with my dad in Melbourne.
I made a really big mistake: I forgot to bring my sun hat, and I didn't put on sunscreen because it had been cloudy the pastrevious few days.
I made a really big mistake: I forgot to bring my sun hat, and I didn't put on sunscreen because it had been cloudy the previous few days.
“The past few days” refers to the few days prior to today. For a few days prior to a point in the past, I would say “the previous few days.”
It was a sunny day and my face started to sting in less than an hour.
I put on aloe vera gel every day for the next few days, and it still took about four or five days to recover.
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Well written!
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This summer I took a river cruise with my dad in Melbourne. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This summer, I took a river cruise with my dad in Melbourne. This summer, I took a river cruise with my dad in Melbourne. |
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I made a really big mistake: I forgot to bring my sun hat, and I didn't put on sunscreen because it had been cloudy the past few days.
I made a really big mistake: I forgot to bring my sun hat, and I didn't put on sunscreen because it had been cloudy the p “The past few days” refers to the few days prior to today. For a few days prior to a point in the past, I would say “the previous few days.”
I made The "and" does not need to be capitalized here, I just did that for emphasis. |
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It was a sunny day and my face started to sting in less than an hour. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I put on aloe vera gel every day for the next few days, and it still took about four or five days to recover. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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