May 11, 2021
Thoughts on Animal Farm
Hello everyone,today,I want to talk about of one of George Orwell's books,which name is:"Animal Farm",the things that I firstly liked about it are the semplicity and the organization of the events, I say this because the book talks of a pretty difficult argument,which covers of how an authoritarian regime is possible thanks to the revolution of people,interconnected in a country,or in a farm in case of the book; talking about the organization of the book,I think the author has done a great job,because every event has a sense on in own and is important for the unity of the whole book, which can be described as Orwell's message on the dangers of political power.
I think this book is worth reading,even though it's pretty short (95 pages) it can be illuminating for readers on some arguments, and it can redefine the popular ideas on political books (fiction and theoretical).
Thoughts on Animal Farm
Hello everyone,today,I want to talk about of one of George Orwell's books,which name is:"Animal Farm",the things that I firstly liked about it are the semplicity and the organization of the events, I say this because the book talks of a pretty difficult argument,which covers of how an authoritarian regime is possible thanks to the revolution of people,interconnected in a country,or in a farm in case of the book; talking about the organization of the book,I think the author has done a great job,because every event has a sense on in own and is important for the unity of the whole book, which can be described as Orwell's message on the dangers of political power.
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I enjoyed reading your account. It shows you already have a good command of English. It just needs a little bit of refining and polishing! So, I've provided a possible alternative way of writing this piece, catering for grammatical, stylistic and punctuation alternatives. What I've written is just my own way of expressing ideas, and I'm not necessarily right in everything! Your account is good as it stands.
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Hello everyone! Today, I want to talk about one of George Orwell's books, namely "Animal Farm".
I particularly like the simplicity and organisation of events in this book. I say this because, through parody, the book talks about a pretty difficult argument, one which covers how an authoritarian regime is possible thanks to the revolution of a country's people.
Concerning the organisation of the book, I think the author has performed a skilful job. Every individual event not only has sense in its own right but also connects with all other events to provide the book with a unity of idea, that is the author's message on the dangers of political power.
I think this book is worth reading. Even though it is quite short (just 95 pages), it can be illuminating for readers on some arguments, and it can redefine the popular ideas on political books, both fictional and theoretical.
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It is the first thing because in English it goes adj and then noun like green apple or red car or blue house.
. Thanks to the revolution of people, interconnected in a country, or a farm in case of the book; talking about the organization of the book,
This is very confusing what are you trying to say. Do you mean how a revolution can stop an authoritarian regime?
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This was good. I recommend using shorter sentences and also the Grammarly chrome extension is very helpful
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Hello everyone,today,I want to talk about of one of George Orwell's books,which name is:"Animal Farm",the things that I firstly liked about it are the semplicity and the organization of the events, I say this because the book talks of a pretty difficult argument,which covers of how an authoritarian regime is possible thanks to the revolution of people,interconnected in a country,or in a farm in case of the book; talking about the organization of the book,I think the author has done a great job,because every event has a sense on in own and is important for the unity of the whole book, which can be described as Orwell's message on the dangers of political power. Hello everyone, today, I want to talk about It is the first thing because in English it goes adj and then noun like green apple or red car or blue house. . Thanks to the revolution of people, interconnected in a country, or a farm in case of the book; talking about the organization of the book, This is very confusing what are you trying to say. Do you mean how a revolution can stop an authoritarian regime? Hello everyone,today,I want to talk about of one of George Orwell's books,which name is:"Animal Farm",the things that I firstly liked about it are the semplicity and the organization of the events, I say this because the book talks of a pretty difficult argument,which covers of how an authoritarian regime is possible thanks to the revolution of people,interconnected in a country,or in a farm in case of the book; talking about the organization of the book,I think the author has done a great job,because every event has a sense on in own and is important for the unity of the whole book, which can be described as Orwell's message on the dangers of political power. See below for suggestions. |
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I think this book is worth reading,even though it's pretty short (95 pages) it can be illuminating for readers on some arguments, and it can redefine the popular ideas on political books (fiction and theoretical). |
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