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THİS SUMMER

This is summer went to Switzerland and Germany . Switzerland is beautiful country.Its natural a perfect.We are went with my friends Meliha. She is a enjoy also She’s english very good. We are to fight sometimes but peace now.We stayed three day there. We buy chochlate there. Its a really delicious.l bought president to my friends. Germany is a history fuly country. Actually We want to going five person but We couldn’t because we can’t do comman plan. We triped three city in the Germany:Berlin,Hamburg,Münih. My favoriye city is Hamburg because its a have kind people and nice streets.The people is very kind switzerland then Germany. We stayed bile bienne otel. We really liked there. After then turn Istanbul. İ really miss there. Always my favorite city is Istanbul.Another at abroad travel see you

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THİS SUMMERhis Summer

This is summer, I went to Switzerland and Germany .

Switzerland is a beautiful country. It's natural aly perfect.We are I went with my friends Meliha.

She is a enjoyfun and also Sshe’s e can speak English very goodwell.

We are to fight sometimes but peacewe're alright now. We stayed three dayere for there.e days.

We buyought chocholate there.

Its a was really delicious.l I bought president tos for my friends.

Germany is a histocountry fuly countl of history.

Actually W, we wanted to goinghave five personople going but Wwe couldn’t because we can’t do comman planour schedules don't line up.

We tripexplored three cityies in the Germany: Berlin, Hamburg, and Münih.

My favoriyte city iwas Hamburg because its a haved kind people and nice streets. The people is very kind swere much kinder in Switzerland thean Germany.

We stayed bile bienne otel.

I don't know what "bile bienne otel" means

We really liked it there.

After that, we went turno Istanbul.

İI really miss it there.

Always mMy favorite city is always Istanbul. Another atravel abroad travel- see you!

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Awesome job! I didn't know what you meant by "bile bienne otel" though so I'm sorry I couldn't help you with that bit.

THİS SUMMERhis Summer

English doesn't use capital dotted i or lowercase dotless i.

In English there is only i and I and I is the capital of i

Titles are usually not fully upper cased, instead being title case ("This Summer") or in casual contexts, sentence case ("This summer").

This is summer I went to Switzerland and Germany .

Switzerland is a beautiful country. Its natural and perfect. We are went with my friends Meliha.

Spaces after full stops are mandatory in English.

She is aalso enjoy also She’s eed it. Her English is very good.

We are to fifought sometimes but made peace now. We stayed theree day theree days.

"fought" is the past tense of "fight"

We buyought chocholate there.

"bought" is the past tense of "buy"

Its a (was/is) really delicious. l bought presidents to my friends.

The first sentence you can actually use "was" or "is". "was" focuses more on the specific chocolate that you have already eaten, while "is" is making a general point about Swiss chocolate, not just the Swiss chocolate that you ate.

"president" = elected leader of a country
"present" = something you got or made for someone else

Germany is a histocountry fuly countl of history.

This the usual phrasing. It's a little unusual grammatically to put the adjective part at the end, so it doesn't apply to every phrase but it is how this phrase is usually used.

Actually Wwe wanted to going with five personople but Wwe couldn’t because we can’t do commanouldn't make a shared plan.

"person" = 1 person
"people" = 0 or 2+ people

We tripvisited three cityies in the Germany: Berlin, Hamburg, Munich.

"cities" is plural. Münih is the turkish name for the city - it's called Munich in English, and München in German. You _can_ use the original (German) name in an English sentence but for places that have a well known English name (like Munich) it's more usual to use the English name.

My favoriyte city is Hamburg because its a haves kind people and nice streets. The people is very kind sare kinder in Switzerland then Germany.

Hamburg is 1 city, so it uses "has".

We stayed bile bienne otel.

No idea what "bile bienne otel" means.

We really liked it there.

Afternd then turnwe returned to Istanbul.

İI really miss thereed it.

Always mMy favorite city is always Istanbul.Another at abroad See you next time I travel see youabroad.

This is summer I went to Switzerland and Germany .

Switzerland is a beautiful country. Its natural afull of nature and perfect.We are I went with my friends Meliha.

She is aalso enjoy also She’sed it. Her english is very good.

We are to fight somefought a few times but peacemade up now. We stayed three days there.

We buyough chocholate there.

Its a was really delicious. l bought president tos for my friends.

Germany is a histocountry fuly countl of history.

Actually Wwe want to going five personere planning to go as a group of five, but Wwe couldn’t because we can’t do comman planplan it in the end.

We tripvisited three cityies in the Germany: Berlin, Hamburg, and Münich.

My favoriye city is Hamburg because its a have kind people and nice streets.The people is very kind speople are kind and its streets are nice. The people are much kinder in Switzerland thean in Germany.

We stayed bile bienne in a hotel.

Not sure what you mean here.

We really liked it there.

After then turnwe travelled to Istanbul.

İ really miss ithere.

Always mMy favourite city is Istanbul.Another at abroad travel see youhas always been Istanbul. See you on our next travel abroads.

We buy chochlate there.


We buyough chocholate there.

We buyought chocholate there.

"bought" is the past tense of "buy"

We buyought chocholate there.

Always my favorite city is Istanbul.Another at abroad travel see you


Always mMy favourite city is Istanbul.Another at abroad travel see youhas always been Istanbul. See you on our next travel abroads.

Always mMy favorite city is always Istanbul.Another at abroad See you next time I travel see youabroad.

Always mMy favorite city is always Istanbul. Another atravel abroad travel- see you!

THİS SUMMER


THİS SUMMERhis Summer

English doesn't use capital dotted i or lowercase dotless i. In English there is only i and I and I is the capital of i Titles are usually not fully upper cased, instead being title case ("This Summer") or in casual contexts, sentence case ("This summer").

THİS SUMMERhis Summer

My favoriye city is Hamburg because its a have kind people and nice streets.The people is very kind switzerland then Germany.


My favoriye city is Hamburg because its a have kind people and nice streets.The people is very kind speople are kind and its streets are nice. The people are much kinder in Switzerland thean in Germany.

My favoriyte city is Hamburg because its a haves kind people and nice streets. The people is very kind sare kinder in Switzerland then Germany.

Hamburg is 1 city, so it uses "has".

My favoriyte city iwas Hamburg because its a haved kind people and nice streets. The people is very kind swere much kinder in Switzerland thean Germany.

We stayed bile bienne otel.


We stayed bile bienne in a hotel.

Not sure what you mean here.

We stayed bile bienne otel.

No idea what "bile bienne otel" means.

We stayed bile bienne otel.

I don't know what "bile bienne otel" means

We really liked there.


We really liked it there.

We really liked it there.

We really liked it there.

After then turn Istanbul.


After then turnwe travelled to Istanbul.

Afternd then turnwe returned to Istanbul.

After that, we went turno Istanbul.

This is summer went to Switzerland and Germany .


This is summer I went to Switzerland and Germany .

This is summer I went to Switzerland and Germany .

This is summer, I went to Switzerland and Germany .

Switzerland is beautiful country.Its natural a perfect.We are went with my friends Meliha.


Switzerland is a beautiful country. Its natural afull of nature and perfect.We are I went with my friends Meliha.

Switzerland is a beautiful country. Its natural and perfect. We are went with my friends Meliha.

Spaces after full stops are mandatory in English.

Switzerland is a beautiful country. It's natural aly perfect.We are I went with my friends Meliha.

She is a enjoy also She’s english very good.


She is aalso enjoy also She’sed it. Her english is very good.

She is aalso enjoy also She’s eed it. Her English is very good.

She is a enjoyfun and also Sshe’s e can speak English very goodwell.

We are to fight sometimes but peace now.We stayed three day there.


We are to fight somefought a few times but peacemade up now. We stayed three days there.

We are to fifought sometimes but made peace now. We stayed theree day theree days.

"fought" is the past tense of "fight"

We are to fight sometimes but peacewe're alright now. We stayed three dayere for there.e days.

Its a really delicious.l bought president to my friends.


Its a (was/is) really delicious. l bought presidents to my friends.

The first sentence you can actually use "was" or "is". "was" focuses more on the specific chocolate that you have already eaten, while "is" is making a general point about Swiss chocolate, not just the Swiss chocolate that you ate. "president" = elected leader of a country "present" = something you got or made for someone else

Its a was really delicious. l bought president tos for my friends.

Its a was really delicious.l I bought president tos for my friends.

Germany is a history fuly country.


Germany is a histocountry fuly countl of history.

This the usual phrasing. It's a little unusual grammatically to put the adjective part at the end, so it doesn't apply to every phrase but it is how this phrase is usually used.

Germany is a histocountry fuly countl of history.

Germany is a histocountry fuly countl of history.

Actually We want to going five person but We couldn’t because we can’t do comman plan.


Actually Wwe want to going five personere planning to go as a group of five, but Wwe couldn’t because we can’t do comman planplan it in the end.

Actually Wwe wanted to going with five personople but Wwe couldn’t because we can’t do commanouldn't make a shared plan.

"person" = 1 person "people" = 0 or 2+ people

Actually W, we wanted to goinghave five personople going but Wwe couldn’t because we can’t do comman planour schedules don't line up.

We triped three city in the Germany:Berlin,Hamburg,Münih.


We tripvisited three cityies in the Germany: Berlin, Hamburg, and Münich.

We tripvisited three cityies in the Germany: Berlin, Hamburg, Munich.

"cities" is plural. Münih is the turkish name for the city - it's called Munich in English, and München in German. You _can_ use the original (German) name in an English sentence but for places that have a well known English name (like Munich) it's more usual to use the English name.

We tripexplored three cityies in the Germany: Berlin, Hamburg, and Münih.

İ really miss there.


İ really miss ithere.

İI really miss thereed it.

İI really miss it there.

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