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SummerTeaWater

April 3, 2021

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Thinking about my learning method

I don't remember how to subscribe the person on Instagram but it leads me to her youtube channel.

She is a multi-language learner and her video clips are about how to learn foreign language with 4 tips.

The tips are
1. immerse yourself throught youtube video
2. use dreams to study body-language
3. read text quickly
4. talk out loud, all the time

Based on her tips, I haven't have enough time to think and to speak in English.

For improving my skill, I need to consider tense more strictly at first.
I can read and understand tenses such as present perfect, present continuous.
But I used wrong way when I spoke and wrote.

Next, I try to make more charming sentences.
Many of my sentences are as same as textbook. So they are not intersting.
With aid of this site, I can reference others' sentences.

For speaking more fluent English, I will do my best.

Corrections

I don't remember how to subscribefollowing theis person on Instagram but itI saw a post which leads me to her yYoutTube channel.

She is a multi-language learner and heras a video clips are about how towith 4 tips for learning a foreign language with 4 tips.

The tips are:

1. iImmerse yourself throught y YoutTube video
2. use dreams to study body-language
3. rRead text quickly
4. tTalk out loud, all the time

I’m really not sure what is meant by point 2, so I’ve left it.

Based on her tips, I haven't haved enough time to think and to speak in English.

Not sure what exactly you mean by this.

ForIn order to improvinge my skills, I need to consider tense more strictly at firstthe first thing I need to do is pay more attention to tenses.

I can read and understand tenses such as present perfect, and present continuous.,

Shouldn’t be separated from the next sentence.

Bbut I usedoften use them in the wrong way when I spokeeak and wroite.

Next, IIn future, I will try to make more charming sentences.

Not sure if this is exactly what you meant to say.

Many of my sentences are as same as in a textbook.

This shouldn’t be separated from the next sentence.

S, so they are notn’t very interesting.

‘Not interesting’ seems a little too absolute.

With aid of this site, I can reference others' sentences.

For speaking more fluent English, I will do my bestI will do my best to improve my English.

Feedback

Well done! Everyone approaches language learning in different ways but I think the most difficult thing is to be honest with yourself. Many people ‘learn’ languages, every putting lots of effort, but don’t develop the practical skills needed to speak that language. I’m also guilty of this, it’s a constant struggle!

Posting on here and receiving feedback and is definitely a good move for us all!

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SummerTeaWater

April 4, 2021

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I agree your opinion especially "don’t develop the practical skills needed to speak that language".
I always read other people's knowhow but I know that I don't spend enough time to speak.

Thinking about my learning method

The tips are

Feedback

Very good!! Very little Mistakes

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Archiekinz

April 3, 2021

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Your English is very good keep up the good work!!

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SummerTeaWater

April 4, 2021

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Thank you very much.

Thinking about my learning method

I don't remember how to subscribe to the person on Instagram but it(clicking on the link in her bio) leads me to her yYoutTube channel.

I think there may be a piece of information missing?

She is a multi-language learner and her video clips are about how to learn a foreign language with 4 tips.

The tips are

1. immerse yourself throught y YoutTube video
2. use dreams to study body-language
3. read text quickly
4. talk out loud, all the time

Based on her tips, I haven't haved enough time to think and to speak in English.

ForTo improvinge my skills, I need to consider tense more strictly at first.

I can read and understand tenses such as present perfect, and present continuous.

But I used them the wrong way when I spokeeak and wroite.

Matching tense to the previous sentence here here. If you want everything to be past tense I would change the previous sentence to be past tense

Next, I will try to make more charming sentences.

Matching "I need to"

Many of my sentences are asthe same as the textbook.

So they are not interesting.

With the aid of this site, I can reference others' sentences.

ForI will do my best so that I can speaking more fluent English, I will do my best.

More natural this way

Feedback

Keep up the good work! Those seem like great tips and goals!

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Archiekinz

April 3, 2021

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Your English is very good keep up the good work!!

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SummerTeaWater

April 4, 2021

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Thanks for your comment!

Many of my sentences are as same as textbook.


Many of my sentences are asthe same as the textbook.

Many of my sentences are as same as in a textbook.

This shouldn’t be separated from the next sentence.

Thinking about my learning method


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't remember how to subscribe the person on Instagram but it leads me to her youtube channel.


I don't remember how to subscribe to the person on Instagram but it(clicking on the link in her bio) leads me to her yYoutTube channel.

I think there may be a piece of information missing?

I don't remember how to subscribefollowing theis person on Instagram but itI saw a post which leads me to her yYoutTube channel.

She is a multi-language learner and her video clips are about how to learn foreign language with 4 tips.


She is a multi-language learner and her video clips are about how to learn a foreign language with 4 tips.

She is a multi-language learner and heras a video clips are about how towith 4 tips for learning a foreign language with 4 tips.

The tips are


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The tips are:

1. immerse yourself throught youtube video 2. use dreams to study body-language 3. read text quickly 4. talk out loud, all the time


1. immerse yourself throught y YoutTube video
2. use dreams to study body-language
3. read text quickly
4. talk out loud, all the time

1. iImmerse yourself throught y YoutTube video
2. use dreams to study body-language
3. rRead text quickly
4. tTalk out loud, all the time

I’m really not sure what is meant by point 2, so I’ve left it.

Based on her tips, I haven't have enough time to think and to speak in English.


Based on her tips, I haven't haved enough time to think and to speak in English.

Based on her tips, I haven't haved enough time to think and to speak in English.

Not sure what exactly you mean by this.

For improving my skill, I need to consider tense more strictly at first.


ForTo improvinge my skills, I need to consider tense more strictly at first.

ForIn order to improvinge my skills, I need to consider tense more strictly at firstthe first thing I need to do is pay more attention to tenses.

I can read and understand tenses such as present perfect, present continuous.


I can read and understand tenses such as present perfect, and present continuous.

I can read and understand tenses such as present perfect, and present continuous.,

Shouldn’t be separated from the next sentence.

But I used wrong way when I spoke and wrote.


But I used them the wrong way when I spokeeak and wroite.

Matching tense to the previous sentence here here. If you want everything to be past tense I would change the previous sentence to be past tense

Bbut I usedoften use them in the wrong way when I spokeeak and wroite.

Next, I try to make more charming sentences.


Next, I will try to make more charming sentences.

Matching "I need to"

Next, IIn future, I will try to make more charming sentences.

Not sure if this is exactly what you meant to say.

So they are not intersting.


So they are not interesting.

S, so they are notn’t very interesting.

‘Not interesting’ seems a little too absolute.

With aid of this site, I can reference others' sentences.


With the aid of this site, I can reference others' sentences.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For speaking more fluent English, I will do my best.


ForI will do my best so that I can speaking more fluent English, I will do my best.

More natural this way

For speaking more fluent English, I will do my bestI will do my best to improve my English.

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