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Sept. 6, 2025

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Things I Might Do After My Retirement

I often think about things I might do after I retire. One thing I am certain of is traveling—both in China and abroad.

I plan to spend two to three years traveling. I think I will need that much time.

After completing my travels, I’d like to run a small business if my health is still good. The business would be a small restaurant.

I sometimes eat out, but I am not satisfied with those restaurants. I often feel unwell after eating at them.

The food in restaurants usually has the following drawbacks: too oily, too salty, and too many condiments, all of which lead to a bitter or sticky mouth, eye secretions, thirst, and sometimes mouth blisters.

No exaggeration, it is very hard to find a restaurant where the food is natural and fresh, and where we won’t feel uncomfortable even after eating there several times in a row.

My homemade food is much better than restaurant food. We always cook food simply, using less oil, less salt, and no condiments.

We only add green onions, ginger, or garlic to our dishes. Surprisingly, dishes cooked this way are incredibly delicious.

It seems I can’t find a restaurant that cooks food this way in my city. Therefore, I believe that a restaurant based on my cooking philosophy would be very successful.

That is why I might run a small restaurant. I want my cooking philosophy to benefit more people, allowing them to eat natural, fresh, and nutritious food.

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The food in restaurants usually has the following drawbacks: too oily, too salty, and too many condiments, all of which lead to a bitter or sticky mouth, eye secretions, thirst, and sometimes mouth blisters.

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Jack

Sept. 7, 2025

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Thank you very much.

Things I Might Do After My Retirement

I often think about things I might do afteronce I retire.

It makes more sense, since you are talking about immediately when you retire as opposed to in a far off distant future post-retirement.

One thing I am certain of is traveling—both in China and abroad.

I planthink I would need to spend two to three years traveling to get the most out of it.

Combine the below sentence with this one. It doesn't have to be like what I wrote verbatim.

I think I will need that much time.

I would remove this sentence and adjoin it to the above sentence.

After completing my travels, I’d like to run a small business if my health is still good.

The business would be a small restaurant.

I sometimes eat out, but I am notever/rarely satisfied with those restaurants and often feel unwell after eating there.

Same thing, combine the next sentence with this one. What you wrote isn't wrong, but it just flows better.

I often feel unwell after eating at them.

TI often find the food in restaurants usually has the following drawbacks:to be too oily, too salty, and to contain too many condiments, all of which lead to having a bitter or sticky mouth, eye secretions, thirst, and sometimes, mouth blisters.

You don't always need to use a colon when listing. I sometimes find it can flow better without one.

No exaggeration, iIt is very harddifficult to find a restaurant where the food is both natural and fresh, and where we won’ton't leave you feeling uncomfortable even after eating there several times in a row.

Again, what you wrote isn't necessarily wrong. Your English is really good! I am changing some things to flow better and to use bigger/better words.

My homemade food is much better than restaurant food, because we cook it using less oil, salt, and without condiments.

Same things, too many small sentences make writing sound choppy. Sometimes it helps to combine sentences.

We always cook food simply, using less oil, less salt, and no condiments.

Combine with the above sentence.

WThe only add green onions, ginger, or garlic to our dishesthings we add to our dishes are green onions, ginger, and sometimes, garlic.

Since this

Surprisingly, dishes cooked this way are incredibly delicious.

IUnfortunately, I haven't sbeems I can’tn able to find a restaurant that cooks food this way in my city.

Therefore, I believe that a restaurant based on my cooking philosophy would be very successful.

That is why I might run a small restaurant.

You don't need this sentence.

I want my cooking philosophy to benefit more people, allowing them to eat natural, fresh, and nutritious food.

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Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 7, 2025

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Thank you very much.

I sometimes eat out, but I am not satisfied with those restaurants.


I sometimes eat out, but I am notever/rarely satisfied with those restaurants and often feel unwell after eating there.

Same thing, combine the next sentence with this one. What you wrote isn't wrong, but it just flows better.

I often feel unwell after eating at them.


I often feel unwell after eating at them.

The food in restaurants usually has the following drawbacks: too oily, too salty, and too many condiments, all of which lead to a bitter or sticky mouth, eye secretions, thirst, and sometimes mouth blisters.


TI often find the food in restaurants usually has the following drawbacks:to be too oily, too salty, and to contain too many condiments, all of which lead to having a bitter or sticky mouth, eye secretions, thirst, and sometimes, mouth blisters.

You don't always need to use a colon when listing. I sometimes find it can flow better without one.

The food in restaurants usually has the following drawbacks: too oily, too salty, and too many condiments, all of which lead to a bitter or sticky mouth, eye secretions, thirst, and sometimes mouth blisters.

No exaggeration, it is very hard to find a restaurant where the food is natural and fresh, and where we won’t feel uncomfortable even after eating there several times in a row.


No exaggeration, iIt is very harddifficult to find a restaurant where the food is both natural and fresh, and where we won’ton't leave you feeling uncomfortable even after eating there several times in a row.

Again, what you wrote isn't necessarily wrong. Your English is really good! I am changing some things to flow better and to use bigger/better words.

My homemade food is much better than restaurant food.


My homemade food is much better than restaurant food, because we cook it using less oil, salt, and without condiments.

Same things, too many small sentences make writing sound choppy. Sometimes it helps to combine sentences.

We always cook food simply, using less oil, less salt, and no condiments.


We always cook food simply, using less oil, less salt, and no condiments.

Combine with the above sentence.

We only add green onions, ginger, or garlic to our dishes.


WThe only add green onions, ginger, or garlic to our dishesthings we add to our dishes are green onions, ginger, and sometimes, garlic.

Since this

Surprisingly, dishes cooked this way are incredibly delicious.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It seems I can’t find a restaurant that cooks food this way in my city.


IUnfortunately, I haven't sbeems I can’tn able to find a restaurant that cooks food this way in my city.

Therefore, I believe that a restaurant based on my cooking philosophy would be very successful.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That is why I might run a small restaurant.


That is why I might run a small restaurant.

You don't need this sentence.

I want my cooking philosophy to benefit more people, allowing them to eat natural, fresh, and nutritious food.


I want my cooking philosophy to benefit more people, allowing them to eat natural, fresh, and nutritious food.

Things I Might Do After My Retirement


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I often think about things I might do after I retire.


I often think about things I might do afteronce I retire.

It makes more sense, since you are talking about immediately when you retire as opposed to in a far off distant future post-retirement.

One thing I am certain of is traveling—both in China and abroad.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I plan to spend two to three years traveling.


I planthink I would need to spend two to three years traveling to get the most out of it.

Combine the below sentence with this one. It doesn't have to be like what I wrote verbatim.

I think I will need that much time.


I think I will need that much time.

I would remove this sentence and adjoin it to the above sentence.

After completing my travels, I’d like to run a small business if my health is still good.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The business would be a small restaurant.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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