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doejhon

May 19, 2021

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There's no worse feeling than a broken heart

The process of falling in love is quite complex, sometimes it happens unnoticed and you don't figure it out that you're in love until you're thoughts are immersed only in that person.

Falling in love is a double-edged sword, it can make you the happiest man on earth, or it can make you the wretchedest man alive.

When you're in love everything is possible... days look brighter, nights feel warmer and you even wonder if you're awake or only in a beautiful dream.

...And when you stare into each other eyes, you can feel that intangible connection becoming real.

Time passes flying when you talk with her, and in the mornings you're first action is to smile because you know that she's right there...and you feel loved.

Part of being human is to know that everything in this life has a beginning and by extension an end.

When love comes to an end ...oh my sweetest friend that the worse feeling that you can ever experience. You feel a dagger directly stabbing at your heart. You feel trapped inside a non-ending loop where your penitence is to remind her. The agony is unbearable and the only momentary sensation of peace that you will have is when you're falling asleep.

Then the nightmare continues, you seer her in your dreams, you talk with her again, you experience again all those beautiful moments that you once had.

Self destruction seems to be the only way out from this pain, you try to forget her drowning your memories in whisky.

Love is beautiful, love is cruel.

Corrections

There's nNo wWorse fFeeling than a bBroken hHeart

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.

The process of falling in love is quite complex, s. Sometimes it happens unnoticed, and you don't figure it out that you're in love until you'rer thoughts are immersed only inonly about that person.

Falling in love is a double-edged sword,: it can make you the happiest man on earth, or it can make you the woretchedest man alive.

When you're in love everything is possible... days look brighter, nights feel warmer, and you even wonder if you're awake or only in a beautiful dream.

...And when you stare into each other eyes, you can feel that intangible connection becoming real.

Time passes flyingflies when you talk with her, and in the mornings you'rer first action is to smile because you know that she's right there...and you feel loved.

Part of being human is to knowing that everything in this life has a beginning and, by extension, an end.

When love comes to an end ... oh my sweetestdear friend, that's the worset feeling that you can ever experience.

You feel a dagger directly stabbing atinto your heart.

You feel trapped inside a nonever-ending loop where your penitence is to be reminded of her.

The agony is unbearable, and the only momentary sensation of peace that you will have is when you're falling asleep.

"You are" is often said/written as "you're".

Then the nightmare continues,: you seer her in your dreams, you talk with her again, you experience once again all those beautiful moments that you once had.

Self destruction seems to be the only way out from this pain,: you try to forget her by drowning your memories in whisky.

Love is beautiful, love is cruel.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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doejhon

May 19, 2021

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Thanks, I appreciate the feedback and corrections!

Theres' no worse feeling than a broken heart


The process of falling in love is quite complex, sometimes it happens unnoticed and you don't figure it out that you're in love until you're thoughts are immersed only in that person.


The process of falling in love is quite complex, s. Sometimes it happens unnoticed, and you don't figure it out that you're in love until you'rer thoughts are immersed only inonly about that person.

Falling in love is a double-edged sword, it can make you the happiest man on earth, or it can make you the wretchedest man alive.


Falling in love is a double-edged sword,: it can make you the happiest man on earth, or it can make you the woretchedest man alive.

When you're in love everything is possible... days look brighter, nights feel warmer and you even wonder if you're awake or only in a beautiful dream.


When you're in love everything is possible... days look brighter, nights feel warmer, and you even wonder if you're awake or only in a beautiful dream.

...And when you stare into each other eyes, you can feel that intangible connection becoming real.


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Time passes flying when you talk with her, and in the mornings you're first action is to smile because you know that she's right there...and you feel loved.


Time passes flyingflies when you talk with her, and in the mornings you'rer first action is to smile because you know that she's right there...and you feel loved.

Part of being human is to know that everything in this life has a beginning and by extension an end.


Part of being human is to knowing that everything in this life has a beginning and, by extension, an end.

When love comes to an end ...oh my sweetest friend that the worse feeling that you can ever experience.


When love comes to an end ... oh my sweetestdear friend, that's the worset feeling that you can ever experience.

You feel a dagger directly stabbing at your heart.


You feel a dagger directly stabbing atinto your heart.

You feel trapped inside a non-ending loop where your penitence is to remind her.


You feel trapped inside a nonever-ending loop where your penitence is to be reminded of her.

The agony is unbearable and the only momentary sensation of peace that you will have is when you're falling asleep.


The agony is unbearable, and the only momentary sensation of peace that you will have is when you're falling asleep.

"You are" is often said/written as "you're".

Then the nightmare continues, you seer her in your dreams, you talk with her again, you experience again all those beautiful moments that you once had.


Then the nightmare continues,: you seer her in your dreams, you talk with her again, you experience once again all those beautiful moments that you once had.

Self destruction seems to be the only way out from this pain, you try to forget her drowning your memories in whisky.


Self destruction seems to be the only way out from this pain,: you try to forget her by drowning your memories in whisky.

Love is beautiful, love is cruel.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There's no worse feeling than a broken heart


There's nNo wWorse fFeeling than a bBroken hHeart

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.

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