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mikethrandir

April 6, 2021

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There are worse prisons than words

I work as a bookseller at a comic bookshop. I love comics, fantasy, and science fiction books, so it's a pleasure to be surrounded by them on a daily basis. Another part I fancy is my job being a customer-oriented work; usually, deal with customers could be stressful but, even though I have stressful days sometimes, I enjoy a lot interacting with people. Because people going to my bookshop are not just average people, they are readers and geeks, and I absolutely adore to talk to them. I learn a lot, have a good time and it feels like I'm having a conversation with some friends.
However, my hours are the worst! I work a split workday, so I'm at the shop four hours in the morning and four hours in the afternoon. If you add the commute, it's like I lived at the bookstore. And even though I love books, I also would love to have time for, I don't know, living, haha.
Overall, I do enjoy my work and the way books and comics are always linked to me. Like Carlos Ruiz Zafón said: there are worse prisons than words.

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I work as a bookseller at a comic bookshoptore.

I love comics, fantasy, and science fiction books, so it's a pleasure to be surrounded by them on a daily basis.

Another part I fancy isabout my job is it being a customer-oriented work; u. Usually, dealing with customers could beis stressful but, even though I have stressful days sometimes, I enjoy a lotdespite having some stressful days, I still enjoy interacting with people a lot.

Because the people who are going to my bookshoptore are not just average people, they are readerbookworms and geeks, and I absolutely adore to talk toalking with them.

I learn a lot, have a good time, and it feels like I'm having a conversation with some friends.

However, my hours are the worst!

I work on a split workdayshift, so I'm at the shop for four hours in the morning and another four hours in the afternoon.

If you add the commute, it's like I lived at in theat bookstore.

Overall, I do enjoy my work and the way books and comics are always linked to me.

LikeAs Carlos Ruiz Zafón said: tonce said, "There are worse prisons than words."

Need to use quotation marks when quoting exact words. :)

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Interesting quote!

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mikethrandir

April 7, 2021

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Thank you very much!

There are worse prisons than words

I work as a bookseller at a comic bookshop store.

what you wrote isn't wrong, this is just a more natural way to say it

I love comics, fantasy, and science fiction books, so it's a pleasure to be surrounded by them on a daily basis.

Another part I fancy islike is that my job being ais customer-oriented work; usually,; dealing with customers couldan be stressful but, even though I have stressful days sometimes, I enjoy a lotreally enjoy interacting with people.

Because people goingwho come to my bookshop are not just average people,; they are readers and geeks, and I absolutely adore to talking to them.

I learn a lot, and have a good time, and it feels like I'm having a conversation with some friends.

However, my hours are the worst!

I work a split workday, so I'm at the shop four hours in the morning and four hours in the afternoon.

If you add in the commute, it's like I lived at the bookstore.

And even though I love books, I also would also love to have time for, I don't know, living, haha.

Like Carlos Ruiz Zafón said: there are worse prisons than words.

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excellent!

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mikethrandir

April 7, 2021

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Thanks you! It has been very helpful to read your feedback:)

There are worse prisons than words


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I work as a bookseller at a comic bookshop.


I work as a bookseller at a comic bookshop store.

what you wrote isn't wrong, this is just a more natural way to say it

I work as a bookseller at a comic bookshoptore.

I love comics, fantasy, and science fiction books, so it's a pleasure to be surrounded by them on a daily basis.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Another part I fancy is my job being a customer-oriented work; usually, deal with customers could be stressful but, even though I have stressful days sometimes, I enjoy a lot interacting with people.


Another part I fancy islike is that my job being ais customer-oriented work; usually,; dealing with customers couldan be stressful but, even though I have stressful days sometimes, I enjoy a lotreally enjoy interacting with people.

Another part I fancy isabout my job is it being a customer-oriented work; u. Usually, dealing with customers could beis stressful but, even though I have stressful days sometimes, I enjoy a lotdespite having some stressful days, I still enjoy interacting with people a lot.

Because people going to my bookshop are not just average people, they are readers and geeks, and I absolutely adore to talk to them.


Because people goingwho come to my bookshop are not just average people,; they are readers and geeks, and I absolutely adore to talking to them.

Because the people who are going to my bookshoptore are not just average people, they are readerbookworms and geeks, and I absolutely adore to talk toalking with them.

I learn a lot, have a good time and it feels like I'm having a conversation with some friends.


I learn a lot, and have a good time, and it feels like I'm having a conversation with some friends.

I learn a lot, have a good time, and it feels like I'm having a conversation with some friends.

However, my hours are the worst!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I work a split workday, so I'm at the shop four hours in the morning and four hours in the afternoon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I work on a split workdayshift, so I'm at the shop for four hours in the morning and another four hours in the afternoon.

If you add the commute, it's like I lived at the bookstore.


If you add in the commute, it's like I lived at the bookstore.

If you add the commute, it's like I lived at in theat bookstore.

And even though I love books, I also would love to have time for, I don't know, living, haha.


And even though I love books, I also would also love to have time for, I don't know, living, haha.

Overall, I do enjoy my work and the way books and comics are always linked to me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Like Carlos Ruiz Zafón said: there are worse prisons than words.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

LikeAs Carlos Ruiz Zafón said: tonce said, "There are worse prisons than words."

Need to use quotation marks when quoting exact words. :)

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