April 28, 2025
The Worst Gift That I Received
When I was a child I received a yellow ruler as a gift from my uncle.
It was a cool ruler, but I didn't enjoy it.
However, I'm grateful receiving for receiving this gift because I could receive nothing from my uncle.
A cool ruler is best than nothing.
The Worst Gift That I Have Ever Received
When I was a child, I received a yellow ruler as a gift from my uncle.
It was a cool ruler, but I didn't enjoylike it.
However, I'm grateful receiving for receiving this gift because I could receive nonever get anything from my uncle.
A cool ruler is bestter than nothing.
The Worst Gift That I've Ever Received
As someone else has already noted, it's better to say "that I have ever" or "that I've ever", or else it sounds like you are talking about a set period of time or a set event. Like, "The worst gift that I received from the party last night."
When I was a child, I received a yellow ruler as a gift from my uncle.
However, I'm grateful receiving for receiving this gift because I could receive nonever get anything from my uncle.
"receive" is a little formal. Here, it feels more natural to simply say "get".
A cool ruler is bestter than nothing.
"better" instead of "best" because we are comparing two things.
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Nicely written! Keep it up!
April 28, 2025
Thank you :)
The Worst Gift That I Have Ever Received
"The Worst Gift That I Received" Has a connotation for a set time like out of all the gifts I got over the holidays. By including "have ever" the connotation is that in your whole life it was the worst one.
When I was a child I received a yellow ruler as a gift from my uncle.
It was a cool ruler, but I didn't enjoy it.
However, I'm grateful receiving for receiving this gift because I could receive nohad never been given anything from my uncle.
"could receive nothing" does not convey the point that uncle had not given you anything before. Instead it almost makes it sound like the uncle is not available to give gifts or something like that.
A cool ruler is bestter than nothing.
These are called superlatives. "Best" is the highest degree and does not fit here.
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Overall good work. I was able to understand what you were trying to say but a few corrections could make this indistinguishable from a natives work.
April 28, 2025
Thank you :)
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