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fakhrulhidayat33

April 30, 2025

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The wonderul day

The day that makes me feel it is a wonderful day is the day when I can apply what I think.
I usually make a plan that I need to execute for the day, but I rarely do it well.
I have experienced such a day before.
Maybe it was because my dopamine levels had recovered through a dopamine detox.
It happened between the 21st and 30th, when I felt energized and as if everything was under my control.
I could decide what I should do clearly and simply.
I hope I can reach that kind of day again.

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The wonderful day

TheA day that makes me feel like it is a wonderful day is thea day when I can apply what I think.

I usually make a plan that I need to execute for the day, but I rarely do it well.

I have experienced such a day before.

Maybe it was because my dopamine levels had recovered through a dopamine detox.

It happened between the 21st and 30th, when I felt energized, and as if everything was under my control.

I could decide what I should do, clearly and simply.

I hope that I can reach/achieve that kind of day again.

"Reach" doesn't really make sense here (at least to me), and I think "achieve" gives the same effect as "reach"

The wonderful day

The day that makes me feel it is a wonderful day is theIt will be a wonderful day when I can apply what I think.

From the rest of your writing, it sounds like you're saying "It will be a wonderful when I can carry out my plans for the day."
You've got a good sense of the meaning behind "apply what I think" in that you're expressing the difference between what you plan versus what you do.

I usually make a plan that I need to execute for the day, but I rarely doexecute it well.

However, I have experienced such a dayday like that before.

"such a" sounds very lofty, poetic, formal.

Maybe it was because my dopamine levels had recovered through a dopamine detox.

It happened bBetween the 21st and 30th, when I felt energized and as if everything was under my control.

I'd recommend combining the previous sentence and this one:
Maybe it was because my dopamine levels had recovered through a detox, but between the 21st and 30th, I felt energized and as if everything was under my control.

I could decide what I should do clearly and simply.

I hope I can reachhave that kind of day again.

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Good job! I wish I would carry out all of my plans on a daily basis as well.

The day that makes me feel like it is a wonderful day is the day when I can apply what I think.

I could decide what I should do clearly and easimply.

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Well done!

The wonderul day


The wonderful day

The wonderful day

The day that makes me feel it is a wonderful day is the day when I can apply what I think.


The day that makes me feel like it is a wonderful day is the day when I can apply what I think.

The day that makes me feel it is a wonderful day is theIt will be a wonderful day when I can apply what I think.

From the rest of your writing, it sounds like you're saying "It will be a wonderful when I can carry out my plans for the day." You've got a good sense of the meaning behind "apply what I think" in that you're expressing the difference between what you plan versus what you do.

TheA day that makes me feel like it is a wonderful day is thea day when I can apply what I think.

I usually make a plan that I need to execute for the day, but I rarely do it well.


I usually make a plan that I need to execute for the day, but I rarely doexecute it well.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have experienced such a day before.


However, I have experienced such a dayday like that before.

"such a" sounds very lofty, poetic, formal.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Maybe it was because my dopamine levels had recovered through a dopamine detox.


Maybe it was because my dopamine levels had recovered through a dopamine detox.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It happened between the 21st and 30th, when I felt energized and as if everything was under my control.


It happened bBetween the 21st and 30th, when I felt energized and as if everything was under my control.

I'd recommend combining the previous sentence and this one: Maybe it was because my dopamine levels had recovered through a detox, but between the 21st and 30th, I felt energized and as if everything was under my control.

It happened between the 21st and 30th, when I felt energized, and as if everything was under my control.

I could decide what I should do clearly and simply.


I could decide what I should do clearly and easimply.

I could decide what I should do clearly and simply.

I could decide what I should do, clearly and simply.

I hope I can reach that kind of day again.


I hope I can reachhave that kind of day again.

I hope that I can reach/achieve that kind of day again.

"Reach" doesn't really make sense here (at least to me), and I think "achieve" gives the same effect as "reach"

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