The wWhales

The wWales are called the kings of the Iocean because of their heightsize.

TheA blue whale can grow up untilto be 30 metters long (it's sovery big).

But they hare hunted for their oil and meat.

In the 1800's, it wasn't a problem because they were hunting whales with wooden boats which movesd slowly and the whale can move until, while whales were much faster - they can swim as fast as 30 km per hours.

But, in the 1900's, a man invented a new weapon: the exploding weapon.

An engine?

And with the advances in technology, the boats becamed faster.

So, there was more thanover 3 millions whales who were being killed a year.

But, the whales becamed popular for the specific songund they make. when (yada yada yada)

"But, whales became popular for the specific sound they make when they go up to the surface of the water for air" for example.

Different associations like Green Peace created reforms to save them and ithat allowed to savefor the preservation of a lot of whale species.

Different associations like Green Peace and _________. Not really an important error - many natives tend to list only one example after saying "Different associations" or "Associations such as". These phrases ask for at least one more example if you've govem one already, but this is often ignored (and no one really cares to be honest)

The wWhales

The wWhales are called the kings of the Iocean because of their heightsize.

The blue whale can grow up until 30 mettersres (it's so big).

But they hare hunted for their oil and meat.

In the 1800's, it wasn't a problem because they were hunting whale withs in wooden boats which moves slowly and the whales can move untilp to 30 km per hours.

So, there was more than 3 millions whales who were bere killed.

But, the whales becamed popular for the specific song they makesing.

Different associations like Green Peace created reforms to save them and it allowed us to save a lot of whale specispecies of whales.

The whales are called the kKings oOf tThe IOcean because of their height.

Wales is a country of the UK, but whales are the animal you are referring to. Kings Of The Ocean is a title, so it should be capitalised

The blue whale can grow up until 30 metters (it's so big).

Wrong spelling of meters

But they hare hunted for their oil and meat.

Not hare, are.

In the 1800's it wasn't a problem because they were hunting whales with wooden boats, which movesd slowly, and the whales canould move until 30 km per hours.

We are talking about all whales, so whales. Since we are talking about the 1800s, it should be in the past tense moved. Can is used for all whales, and could is used for some, so could is more suitable. The until is redundant meaning useless.

And with the advances in technology, the boats becamed faster.

Became is already past tense so the d at the end is useless

So, there was more than 3 millions whales who were be killed.

No need for s at the end of a million unless there is no number of millions given like "3 million" and "Millions of whales". Were is already past tense so be is useless

But, the whales becamed popular for the specific song they make.

Again, became is already past tense so d is useless

Different associations like Green Ppeace created reforms to save them and it allowed to save a lot of whale species.

Greenpeace should be together