June 20, 2025
The trip of the dreams
Every morning carrying the promise of a new beginning. The tallest mountain ever were plains. And the rivers more mighty begain how littles springs. That's how it is the life, a trip of littles steeps that with perseveranse. It will convert in big marks.
Cada amanecer trae consigo la promesa de un nuevo comienzo. Las montañas más altas alguna vez fueron llanuras, y los ríos más caudalosos empezaron como pequeños manantiales. Así es la vida: un viaje de pasos pequeños que, con perseverancia, se convierten en grandes huellas.
The trip of the dreams
The trip of whose dreams?
Every morning carryingies with it the promise of a new beginning.
In English we use "with it" just like the Spanish "consigo" and it gives the sentence a more personal/poetic feeling.
The tallest mountain ever wers were once plains.,
"alguna vez fueron" = "were once"
Aand the rivers more mightymightiest rivers begain howas littles springs.
That's how it is the life,life is; a trip of littles steeps that, with perseveranse.ce,
It will convert in big markturn into great footprints.
"huellas" = footprints or fingerprints.
Another way to say it is "will leave great/grand footprints" but this means leaving a legacy behind.
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FANTASTIC entry. I loved reading it and I could visualize your English writing.
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All capitalized words for titles. I am not sure if you meant this is the trip of your dreams or the trip of many people's dreams so I changed it to the first one.
Every morning carrying the promise of a new beginning.
The tallest mountain ever wereused to be [were initially or started out as, also work here] plains.
If you are saying they started out at plains, it can be taken in the wrong way. So saying they used to be, were initially, started out as, are all clearer options.
And the rivers more mighty begain howas littles springs.
Few spelling errors and how does not work here, as is used for comparing.
That's how it is the life is, a trip of littles steeps that with, which builds perseveransce.
We wouldn't speak like this, so I changed it to flow better.
It will convert in big markhange in large strides.
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Great job, you're almost there!
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"huellas" = footprints or fingerprints. Another way to say it is "will leave great/grand footprints" but this means leaving a legacy behind. |
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