May 8, 2024
The Summer is getting closer.
The Summer is getting closer.
In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here, summer and winter.
Fall and spring are too short to catch, so I will cherish the moment.
I believe after the Dragon Boat Festival, the weather will be hard to bear for me.
I hate how the clothes stick on the skin with sweat, I hate bugs, hate how quickly the food can be rotten.
But still, I tried to bring some bright side before this essay became too pathetic.
I admire the smell of summer fruit, mango, peach, and watermelon. Their textures are soft and juicy, like the season itself with a luscious vibe.
If every season has its own color, I believe red and orange will be the good choice for it, overwhelming and bold.
The Summer is getting closer.
The Summer is getting closer.
In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here, summer and winter.
Fall and spring are almost too short to catch, sobut I will cherish the moment.
I believe after the Dragon Boat Festival, the weather will be hard to bear for me.
I hate how the clothes stick ton the skin with sweat, I hate bugs, and I hate how quickly the food can bebecomes rotten.
But still, I tried to bring som'll try to talk about the bright side before this essay becaomes too pathetic.
I admire the smell of summer fruit, mango, peach, and watermelon.
Their textures are soft and juicy, like the season itself with a luscious vibe.
If every season hasd its own color, I believe red and orange willould be thea good choice for it, overwhelming and bold.
May 9, 2024
Thanks for your help!
The Summer is getting closer.
The Summer is getting closer.
In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here, summer and winter.
Fall and spring are too short to catch, so I will cherish theeach moment.
I believe after the Dragon Boat Festival, the weather will be hard for me to bear for me.
I hate how the clothes stick on the skin with sweat, I hate bugs, hate how quickly the food can be rottenrot.
But still, I triedwill try to bring in some bright sides before this essay becaomes too pathetic.
I admire the smell of summer fruit, mango, peach, and watermelon.
Their textures are soft and juicy, like the season itself with a luscious vibe.
If every season has its own color, I believe red and orange will be the good choices for itsummer, overwhelming and bold.
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Your English is very good!
May 9, 2024
Thank you! It really helps.
The Summer is getting closer.approaching
The Summer is getting closerapproaching.
Or: "Summer is getting closer and closer."
In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here,: summer and winter.
Or: "...we often joke that we only have two seasons: summer and winter."
Fall and spring are too short to catchount, so I will cherish the moment.
I believe after the Dragon Boat Festival, the weather will be hard to bear for mthe weather will be unbearable for me after the Dragon Boat Festival in June.
I added "in June" because many people don't know when it is :)
I hate how the clothes stick on the skin with sweatthe feeling of sweat sticking my clothes to my skin, I hate bugs, and I hate how quickly the food can be rottenspoil.
But still, I'm tried to bring somying to look on the bright side before this essay became too patheticwallowing in self-pity in this essay.
I admirlove the smell of summer fruit, mango, peach, and watermelon.
Their textures are soft and juicyy are soft, juicy, and luscious, like the season itself with a luscious vibe.
I wouldn't really call a watermelon's texture (even the inside) soft and juicy
If every season hasd its own color, I believethink red and orange willould be the goodbest choice for it,: overwhelming and bold.
May 9, 2024
Thanks for your help!
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The Summer is getting closer.
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The Summer is getting closer.
Or: "Summer is getting closer and closer."
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In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here, summer and winter. In Taiwan, we often joke that there are only two seasons here Or: "...we often joke that we only have two seasons: summer and winter."
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Fall and spring are too short to catch, so I will cherish the moment. Fall and spring are too short to c Fall and spring are almost too short to catch, Fall and spring are too short to catch, so I will cherish |
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I believe after the Dragon Boat Festival, the weather will be hard to bear for me. I believe I added "in June" because many people don't know when it is :)
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I hate how the clothes stick on the skin with sweat, I hate bugs, hate how quickly the food can be rotten. I hate I hate how I hate how |
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But still, I tried to bring some bright side before this essay became too pathetic. But still, I'm tr But still, I But still, I |
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I admire the smell of summer fruit, mango, peach, and watermelon. I |
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Their textures are soft and juicy, like the season itself with a luscious vibe. The I wouldn't really call a watermelon's texture (even the inside) soft and juicy
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If every season has its own color, I believe red and orange will be the good choice for it, overwhelming and bold. If every season ha If every season ha If every season has its own color, I believe red and orange will be |
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