Sept. 11, 2025
The Situation in Nepal
On September 9th Nepal's prime minister suddenly resigned and fled by plane.
The cause was that the Oli government announced a ban on social media platforms, which led to millions of Nepalese people going offline.
While TikTok is accessible, other platforms such as Twitter, Facebook ane YouTube are blocked.
This is why many young people who are dissatisfied with the government have taken TikTok as a gathering place.
On September 8th, tens of thousands of people gathered in Kathmandu.
The angry crowd set fire to government buildings.
Nepal's administrative system collapsed instantly.
There are three root causes of the political crisis.
First, there is economic despair, as the unemployment rate in Nepal exceeds 20%.
Secondly, Nepal's tourism and handicrafts industries rely on social media for promotion, and the ban has sparked dissatisfaction.
Nepal relies on India for 70% of its trade.
The Oli government's friendliness towards China has alerted India.
After this political turmoil, India is very likely to support pro-Indian parties.
9月9日尼泊尔总理突然宣布辞职，并坐飞机逃走。
起因是奥利政府宣布封禁社交媒体平台，导致数百万尼泊尔人全部掉线。
除了Tiktok可以使用，推特、脸书、优酷等平台均不能使用。
很多不满政府的年轻人就把Tiktok当成了集合地。
9月8日数万人在加德满都集会，愤怒的人群火烧了政府大楼。
尼泊尔的行政体系瞬间垮台。
政治危机的根源有三方面。
首先经济上的绝望，因为尼泊尔的失业率超过20%。
其次尼泊尔的旅游业和手工业依赖社交媒体进行推广，禁令引发不满。
最后是尼泊尔政治的腐败问题。
尼泊尔70%的贸易依赖印度。
奥利政府对华友好，让印度警惕。
这次政治动荡之后，印度很可能扶持亲印派。
The Situation in Nepal
On September 9th Nepal's prime minister suddenly resigned and fled by plane.
The cause was that the Oli government announced a ban on social media platforms, which led to millions of Nepalese people going offline.
While TikTok is accessible, other platforms such as Twitter, Facebook aned YouTube are blocked.
A simple spelling error, nothing more.
This is why many young people who are dissatisfied with the government have taken to TikTok as a gathering place.
Just one word required to correct the sentence. Using "to" in "have taken to TikTok" is important for clarifying that the people are using the app together, and have not literally "taken" it, as in stealing.
On September 8th, tens of thousands of people gathered in Kathmandu.
The angry crowd set fire to government buildings.
Nepal's administrative system collapsed instantly.
There are three root causes of the political crisis.
First, there is economic despair, as the unemployment rate in Nepal exceeds 20%.
Secondly, Nepal's tourism and handicrafts industries rely on social media for promotion, and the ban has sparked dissatisfaction.
Nepal relies on India for 70% of its trade.
The Oli government's friendliness towards China has alerted India.
After this political turmoil, India is very likely to support pro-Indian parties.
Feedback
It's well written, overall! If the goal is to really attain a scholarly level of English proficiency, I would spend a little bit of time reading similar articles to see how to pace the sentences better. As it stands, they are correct, but a little brief and blunt. In a news context, this is okay, but you can still provide a little more space to breath and a little more detail without becoming sensational.
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On September 9th Nepal's prime minister suddenly resigned and fled by plane. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The cause was that the Oli government announced a ban on social media platforms, which led to millions of Nepalese people going offline. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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While TikTok is accessible, other platforms such as Twitter, Facebook ane YouTube are blocked. While TikTok is accessible, other platforms such as Twitter, Facebook an A simple spelling error, nothing more. |
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This is why many young people who are dissatisfied with the government have taken TikTok as a gathering place. This is why many young people who are dissatisfied with the government have taken to TikTok as a gathering place. Just one word required to correct the sentence. Using "to" in "have taken to TikTok" is important for clarifying that the people are using the app together, and have not literally "taken" it, as in stealing. |
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On September 8th, tens of thousands of people gathered in Kathmandu. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nepal's administrative system collapsed instantly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are three root causes of the political crisis. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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First, there is economic despair, as the unemployment rate in Nepal exceeds 20%. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Secondly, Nepal's tourism and handicrafts industries rely on social media for promotion, and the ban has sparked dissatisfaction. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Nepal relies on India for 70% of its trade. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After this political turmoil, India is very likely to support pro-Indian parties. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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