April 7, 2021
The Shuangqing Bay Park
Last night, I went to Shuangqing Bay Park in the rain. It's been a long while since the last time I was there, and the views changed a lot. I went there in daylight before, and never in the night, so the night view is very new to me. The first thing that surprised me was the Fuyang science and technology museum. It changed its colors and patterns in the night, and one of those patterns that impressed me the most was a pattern that looked pretty like the night sky, deep and wide. The Grand Theater was already completely built, and it was hyaline. It was composed of several oval parts, and each part with different colors of light and the colors continue to change. These two buildings were built in the park. Apart from this, there are many real estate buildings around the park. To its southwest is Anhui Zhidi, to its northeast is Lifeng Group. These two buildings were light in the night, especially the Lifeng Group. They changed many patterns and the colors were very bright. To the lake's right south, were two over 240 meters tall buildings built by China Resources, and they were almost done, which were also the landmark of Fuyang at present. Because of the rain, there were fewer people in the park, so it was very quiet. The air was really fresh and the environment was clean and tidy. It brought me very nice feelings. I took a walk surrounding the park and the total trip was about 2 kilometers. After that, I drove home. I think I had a really nice night.
It's been a long while since the last time I was there, and the views have changed a lot.
I went there in daylightduring the day before, and never in theat night, so the night view is very new to me.
It changeds its colors and patterns in theat night, and one of those patterns that impressed me the most was a pattern that looked prettyquite like the night sky, deep and wide.
The Grand Theater was already completely built, and it was hyaline.
hyaline? I've never heard that word, maybe you could say "perfectly clear", if that's what you mean?
It was composed of several oval partsections, and each part with different colors of light and the colors continue toas interspersed with lights whose colors were constantly changeing.
Apart from this, there are many real estate buildings around the park.
real estate = any kind of development, so we wouldn't say "real estate buildings" because it's redundant. You could say "there is lots of commercial real estate" or "there are lots of commercial buildings"
These two buildings were light in thet up at night, especially the Lifeng Group.
They changed many patternsir lighting patterns changed often and the colors were very bright.
To the lake's right south, were twosouthwest of the lake , there are two buildings over 240 meters tall buildings built by China Resources, and they weare almost done, which were also the landmark of Fuyang at presentmaking them some of Fuyang's best-known landmarks already.
You can't put a cardinal direction (north, south, east, west) and a word like right or left right next to each other
It brought me very nice feelingsmade me feel very nice.
I took a walk surrounding the park and the total trip was about 2 kilometersof around two kilometers around the park.
April 8, 2021
It changeds its colors and patterns in theat night, and one of those patterns that impressed me the most was a pattern that looked prettyquite like the night sky, deep and wide.
Could you please tell me why it’s “the” here but “those”? Thank you very much.
April 8, 2021
To the lake's right south, were twosouthwest of the lake , there are two buildings over 240 meters tall buildings built by China Resources, and they weare almost done, which were also the landmark of Fuyang at presentmaking them some of Fuyang's best-known landmarks already.
“ making them some of Fuyang's best-known landmarks already.”
I can’t understand “some of” in the sentence. I can understand it well if it is rephrased like “making them the best-know landmarks of Fuyang already.” Could you please give me a little more guidance?
April 8, 2021
The Grand Theater was already completely built, and it was hyaline.
Hyaline. I mean the facade materials of the theater are glasses. At night with lights, you can see the inside of the theater from outside.
April 8, 2021
Could you please tell me why it’s “the” here but “those”? Thank you very much.
It might be "these," actually, because you just mentioned them. But I might still use "the," because the context is already clear? Bit hard to describe why one way feels better, sorry I can't provide a better answer at the moment :/
April 8, 2021
“ making them some of Fuyang's best-known landmarks already.” I can’t understand “some of” in the sentence. I can understand it well if it is rephrased like “making them the best-know landmarks of Fuyang already.” Could you please give me a little more guidance?
If they're already Fuyang's best-known landmarks, we can say:
"To the southwest of the lake, China Resources has nearly completed two skyscrapers which, at over 240 meters tall, have already become Fuyang's best-known landmarks."
April 8, 2021
Hyaline. I mean the facade materials of the theater are glasses. At night with lights, you can see the inside of the theater from outside.
Hyaline is a very scientific-sounding term, I wouldn't use it. You can say:
"The Grand Theater has already been finished, and it's enclosed entirely in glass."
April 8, 2021
Enclose. Thank you very much.
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The Shuangqing Bay Park |
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Last night, I went to Shuangqing Bay Park in the rain. |
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It's been a long while since the last time I was there, and the views changed a lot. It's been a long while since the last time I was there, and the views have changed a lot. |
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I went there in daylight before, and never in the night, so the night view is very new to me. I went there |
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The first thing that surprised me was the Fuyang science and technology museum. |
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It changed its colors and patterns in the night, and one of those patterns that impressed me the most was a pattern that looked pretty like the night sky, deep and wide. It change |
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The Grand Theater was already completely built, and it was hyaline. The Grand Theater was already completely built, and it was hyaline. hyaline? I've never heard that word, maybe you could say "perfectly clear", if that's what you mean? |
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It was composed of several oval parts, and each part with different colors of light and the colors continue to change. It was composed of several oval |
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These two buildings were built in the park. |
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Apart from this, there are many real estate buildings around the park. Apart from this, there are many real estate buildings around the park. real estate = any kind of development, so we wouldn't say "real estate buildings" because it's redundant. You could say "there is lots of commercial real estate" or "there are lots of commercial buildings" |
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To its southwest is Anhui Zhidi, to its northeast is Lifeng Group. |
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These two buildings were light in the night, especially the Lifeng Group. These two buildings were li |
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They changed many patterns and the colors were very bright. The |
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To the lake's right south, were two over 240 meters tall buildings built by China Resources, and they were almost done, which were also the landmark of Fuyang at present. To the You can't put a cardinal direction (north, south, east, west) and a word like right or left right next to each other |
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Because of the rain, there were fewer people in the park, so it was very quiet. |
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The air was really fresh and the environment was clean and tidy. |
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It brought me very nice feelings. It |
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I took a walk surrounding the park and the total trip was about 2 kilometers. I took a walk |
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After that, I drove home. |
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I think I had a really nice night. |
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