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fakhrulhidayat33

April 11, 2025

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The second try

Using this text, I am trying to translate it to English. Maybe the words I chose it's difficult for the second try. Yet, I feel this is a correct action. I have achieved intermediate grade in Toefl test. However, I haven't had enough experience to get propel skill for writing in English. So, my experience is still flaw. I hope if I becomes diligent to do this action, I will be feel common to do it.


Melalui tulisan ini, saya mencoba untuk mengubahnya menjadi tulisan dalam bentuk bahasa Inggris. Mungkin pemilihan kata-kata saya cukup berat untuk mengawali percobaan kedua kali ini. Tetapi, saya rasa ini adalah tindakan yang tepat. Saya telah meraih tingkatan cukup ketika tes toefl. Hanya saja, saya tidak memliiki pengalaman untuk membuat tulisan dalam bentuk bahasa inggris. Sehingga, pengalamanku untuk menulis itu kurang. Semoga dengan sering melakukan ini, saya jadi terbiasa

Corrections

Using this text, I am trying to translate it to English.

You could also say, "I am trying to translate this text to English."

Maybe the words I chose it'sare difficult for themy second try.

Yet, I feel this is a correct action.

This sentence is correct but sounds a little awkward. I might say, "Yet, I feel this is a good idea"

I have achieved an intermediate grade in Toeflthe TOEFL test.

we use the indefinite article for "an intermediate grade" and a definite article for "the TOEFL test"

However, I haven't had enough experience to get propelr skills for writing in English.

So, my experiencewriting is still flawed.

I changed "experience" to "writing" because experience can't be flawed.

If you want to talk about your experience, I might say "so, my experience is still developing."

I hope if I becomes diligent to dodoing this action, I will be feel common to donfident doing it.

I'm not sure what you mean by "feel common," but maybe you are hoping to gain confidence in your writing skills?

The second try

Using this text, I am trying to translate it to English.

Maybe the words I chose it'sare difficult for the second try.

Yet, I feel this is a correct action.

I have achieved at intermediate grade in Toeflthe TOEFL test.

However, I haven't had enough experience to get propel skill fodevelop proper writing skills in English.

So, my experience is still flawed.

I hope if I becomes diligent to do this action, I will be feel commonpelled to do it.

The second try


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Using this text, I am trying to translate it to English.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Using this text, I am trying to translate it to English.

You could also say, "I am trying to translate this text to English."

Maybe the words I chose it's difficult for the second try.


Maybe the words I chose it'sare difficult for the second try.

Maybe the words I chose it'sare difficult for themy second try.

Yet, I feel this is a correct action.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Yet, I feel this is a correct action.

This sentence is correct but sounds a little awkward. I might say, "Yet, I feel this is a good idea"

I have achieved intermediate grade in Toefl test.


I have achieved at intermediate grade in Toeflthe TOEFL test.

I have achieved an intermediate grade in Toeflthe TOEFL test.

we use the indefinite article for "an intermediate grade" and a definite article for "the TOEFL test"

However, I haven't had enough experience to get propel skill for writing in English.


However, I haven't had enough experience to get propel skill fodevelop proper writing skills in English.

However, I haven't had enough experience to get propelr skills for writing in English.

So, my experience is still flaw.


So, my experience is still flawed.

So, my experiencewriting is still flawed.

I changed "experience" to "writing" because experience can't be flawed. If you want to talk about your experience, I might say "so, my experience is still developing."

I hope if I becomes diligent to do this action, I will be feel common to do it.


I hope if I becomes diligent to do this action, I will be feel commonpelled to do it.

I hope if I becomes diligent to dodoing this action, I will be feel common to donfident doing it.

I'm not sure what you mean by "feel common," but maybe you are hoping to gain confidence in your writing skills?

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