June 2, 2021
The second day
If I could only eat one meal for the rest of my life, it would be bananas.
The second dayDay 2
'The second day' sounds a bit formal. However, if you were going to make that phrase the title, the first letter of each of the words should be capitalised, like so: 'The Second Day'. (Normally, in a title, 'the' doesn't have a capital 'T', except when it is the first word in the title).
If I could only eat one mealfood for the rest of my life, it would be bananas.
I know the prompt is about what MEAL you would eat, however bananas aren't technically a meal, so here it would make more sense to say food. Alternatively, you could say something like 'If I could only eat one meal for the rest of my life, it would be açaí bowls with banana on top', or some other sort of dish that includes bananas within it.
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Your grammar is perfect! Maybe write a bit of a longer response next time so you can get even more feedback :) Love that you are participating in the challenge!
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The second day
'The second day' sounds a bit formal. However, if you were going to make that phrase the title, the first letter of each of the words should be capitalised, like so: 'The Second Day'. (Normally, in a title, 'the' doesn't have a capital 'T', except when it is the first word in the title). |
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If I could only eat one meal for the rest of my life, it would be bananas. If I could only eat one I know the prompt is about what MEAL you would eat, however bananas aren't technically a meal, so here it would make more sense to say food. Alternatively, you could say something like 'If I could only eat one meal for the rest of my life, it would be açaí bowls with banana on top', or some other sort of dish that includes bananas within it. |
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