April 8, 2025
The purpose of life
After witnessing gains and losses in life (money, health, human live...). I realize that the purpose of this live is coming to this world to experience how this world is. I don't know how to explain this.
For example, you invest all of your money to start your own business, you will face up with 2 possibilities: one is you can earn money from this business, another is you suffer a loss. In the second scenario, there are some people witnessing you and say " I had better do nothing, it would cost me energy, money, and time and in return I get nothing". But in my opinion, the first scenario worth trying because at least I did choose to do something, and the stories in my life define who I am, so gain and loss just a part of it, not the amount of money.
In this world, I think nothing is totally right, and nothing is totally wrong, its just you choose what to do, and the responsibility for it, all you do is the experience of life.
The pPurpose of lLife
Important words in title have capital letter.
After witnessing gains and losses in life (money, health, human lives...).
'human life' or 'human lives'
I realize that the purpose of this livfe is coming toin this world is to experience how this world is.
'life' singular form.
I don't know how to explain this.
For example, if you invest all of your money toin starting your own business, you will face up with 2two possibilities: one is you can earn money from this business, another is you suffer a loss.
In the second scenario, there are some people witnessing youthis and saying, " I had better do nothing, i. It would cost me energy, money, and time and in return I get nothing"."
witnessing and saying are connected to the 'there are'. Present progressive aspect.
But, in my opinion, the first scenario is worth trying because at least I did choose to do something, and the stories in my life define who I am, so g. Gain and loss are just a part of it, not the amount of money.
'chose' past tense.
In this world, I think nothing is totally right, and nothing is totally wrong, its just what you choose what to do, and the responsibility for it, all. Everything you do is thlife experience of life.
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Good work. Have just switched a few things around.
I realize that the purpose of this livfe is coming into this world to experience how this world is.
For example, you invest all of your money to start your own business, you will face up with 2 possibilities: one is you can earn money from this business, another is you suffer a loss.
In the second scenario, there are some people witnessing you and say " I hadt's better do nothing, it would cost me energy, money, and time and in return I get nothing".
But in my opinion, the first scenario is worth trying because at least I did choose to do something, and the stories in my life define who I am. So, sto gain and losto lose is just a part of it, not the amount of money.
In this world, I think nothing is totally right, and nothing is totally wrong, it. It's just you choose what to do, and the responsibility for it, all you do. All get is the experience of life.
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Well done!
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The purpose of life The Important words in title have capital letter. |
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After witnessing gains and losses in life (money, health, human live...). After witnessing gains and losses in life (money, health, human lives...). 'human life' or 'human lives' |
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I realize that the purpose of this live is coming to this world to experience how this world is. I realize that the purpose of this li I realize that the purpose of this li 'life' singular form. |
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I don't know how to explain this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But in my opinion, the first scenario worth trying because at least I did choose to do something, and the stories in my life define who I am, so gain and loss just a part of it, not the amount of money. But in my opinion, the first scenario is worth trying because at least I did choose to do something, and the stories in my life define who I am. So, But, in my opinion, the first scenario is worth trying because at least I 'chose' past tense. |
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