May 8, 2021
The place I dream of
Before I take this trip, I never thought there's a place that I dream to live.
The world always tell, you need to work hard to gain the opportunity to live in a dream house, which means a house have a swimming pool, a large kitchen or living room, also a beautiful view that you can watch while bathing or the moment you wake up in your bed.
Eventually I found out that, a place that you dream of, is not a place about luxury, or near a shore, it is a place that you can forget everything you ever have or never had, even forget yourself.
My heart felt peace whenever a breeze passby, I believe that is the place I dream to live.
The place I dream of.
Before I takeook this trip, I never thought there's a place that I dream to live.
The world always tell,s you that you need to work hard to gain the opportunity to live in a dream house, which means a house have(with/that has) a swimming pool, a large kitchen or living room, also a beautiful view that you can watch while bathing or the moment you wake up in your bed.
Eventually, I found out that, a place that you dream of, is not a place about luxury, or near a shore, it is a place that you can forget everything you ever have or never had, even forget yourself.
My heart felt peace whenever a breeze passes by, I believe that is the place I dream to live.
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Before I take this trip, I never thought there's a place that I dream to live. Before I t |
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The world always tell, you need to work hard to gain the opportunity to live in a dream house, which means a house have a swimming pool, a large kitchen or living room, also a beautiful view that you can watch while bathing or the moment you wake up in your bed. The world always tell |
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Eventually I found out that, a place that you dream of, is not a place about luxury, or near a shore, it is a place that you can forget everything you ever have or never had, even forget yourself. Eventually, I found out that, a place that you dream of, is not a place about luxury, or near a shore, it is a place that you can forget everything you ever have or never had, even forget yourself. |
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My heart felt peace whenever a breeze passby, I believe that is the place I dream to live. My heart felt peace whenever a breeze passes by, I believe that is the place I dream to live. |
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