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The perfect dress for this summer

As I have been able to see in some fashions magazines such Vogue , there is a dress , which all these magazines think that is the perfect dress for this summer , although we have to see in the last season , this kind of dress come back with more force in to the runwalks for brands like for example : Chanel , Chloé or Toteme , but these brands haven´t been the main to name this dress how the dress for this summer, but rather has been Daisy Edgar-Jones the main reason to name this dress as the most importan dress for this summer , since , the last week she had been seen in the street wearing this drees , This dress , is a mini butter yellow dress with more moviment in the down part for over her knees , has matched with a blue jacket and beutiful red boots . In conclusion , She had seen wearing a total mix of colors , and as , she is a huge figurate of inspirations , the brands has seen this fact as a oportunity for out their amazing clothes follow the Edgar-Jones ´s style .
For this reason , the previous summer , we have been seeing many people wearing this kind of clothers .
In my opinion , i not am a huge fan of these colors and this kind of clothers , but i may be to fell in this trendy to out of my confort zone .
What are your opinion about this trendy ? . Plesea let me know

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The perfect dress for this summer

As I have been able to've seen in some fashions magazines such as Vogue , there is a dress , which all these magazines think that is the perfect dress for this summer , a. Although we have to see, as we saw in the last season , this kind of dress comes back with more force in to the runcatwalks for brands like for example : Chanel , Chloé or Toteme , but these brands haven´'t been the main brands to name this dress how the dress for this summer, but rather has beenas this summer's dress. But rather Daisy Edgar-Jones has been the main reason to name this dress as the most important dress for this summer , since , the last week she had been seen in the street wearing this drees ,ss. This dress , is a mini butter yellow dress with more moviment in the down part forement over ther knees , h, and was matched with a blue jacket and beautiful red boots .

"runwalks" - use either "runway" or "catwalk". Both are fine.

"the dress for this summer" - for simple posession, use the ['s]. e.g. "this summer's dress" sounds more natural.

Consider writing shorter sentences, it makes it easier to follow.

In conclusion , Sshe hadwas seen wearing a total mix of colours , and as , she i's a huge figurate of inspirations , theal figure, brands hasve seen this fact as a opportunity for out their amazing clothes to follow the Edgar-Jones ´s style .

'colors' is American English spelling, perfectly fine but if you want to use British English use "colours"

"the brands" - use either "brands" for the plural, or "the brand" for a single, definitive article.

For this reason , the previous summer , we have been seeingseen many people wearing thisese kind of clothers s.

"this" - for a single item. "these" for multiple items. So "these clothes", as clothes is always plural

In my opinion , iI not am a huge fan of these colours and this kind of clothers , but i may be to fell in this trendy to may be out of my conmfort zone .

Few spelling mistakes.

Remember "I" is always a capital letter

What are your opinion about this trendy ?

"trend" - a style or fashion for a given time

"Trendy" - something that follows a trend.

example: "There's a trend for white shoes currently". "Your shoes are trendy".

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Pleasea let me know

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As I have been able to see in some fashions magazines such Vogue , there is a dress , which all these magazines think that is the perfect dress for this summer , although we have to see in the last season , this kind of dress come back with more force in to the runwalks for brands like for example : Chanel , Chloé or Toteme , but these brands haven´t been the main to name this dress how the dress for this summer, but rather has been Daisy Edgar-Jones the main reason to name this dress as the most importan dress for this summer , since , the last week she had been seen in the street wearing this drees , This dress , is a mini butter yellow dress with more moviment in the down part for over her knees , has matched with a blue jacket and beutiful red boots .


As I have been able to've seen in some fashions magazines such as Vogue , there is a dress , which all these magazines think that is the perfect dress for this summer , a. Although we have to see, as we saw in the last season , this kind of dress comes back with more force in to the runcatwalks for brands like for example : Chanel , Chloé or Toteme , but these brands haven´'t been the main brands to name this dress how the dress for this summer, but rather has beenas this summer's dress. But rather Daisy Edgar-Jones has been the main reason to name this dress as the most important dress for this summer , since , the last week she had been seen in the street wearing this drees ,ss. This dress , is a mini butter yellow dress with more moviment in the down part forement over ther knees , h, and was matched with a blue jacket and beautiful red boots .

"runwalks" - use either "runway" or "catwalk". Both are fine. "the dress for this summer" - for simple posession, use the ['s]. e.g. "this summer's dress" sounds more natural. Consider writing shorter sentences, it makes it easier to follow.

In conclusion , She had seen wearing a total mix of colors , and as , she is a huge figurate of inspirations , the brands has seen this fact as a oportunity for out their amazing clothes follow the Edgar-Jones ´s style .


In conclusion , Sshe hadwas seen wearing a total mix of colours , and as , she i's a huge figurate of inspirations , theal figure, brands hasve seen this fact as a opportunity for out their amazing clothes to follow the Edgar-Jones ´s style .

'colors' is American English spelling, perfectly fine but if you want to use British English use "colours" "the brands" - use either "brands" for the plural, or "the brand" for a single, definitive article.

For this reason , the previous summer , we have been seeing many people wearing this kind of clothers .


For this reason , the previous summer , we have been seeingseen many people wearing thisese kind of clothers s.

"this" - for a single item. "these" for multiple items. So "these clothes", as clothes is always plural

In my opinion , i not am a huge fan of these colors and this kind of clothers , but i may be to fell in this trendy to out of my confort zone .


In my opinion , iI not am a huge fan of these colours and this kind of clothers , but i may be to fell in this trendy to may be out of my conmfort zone .

Few spelling mistakes. Remember "I" is always a capital letter

What are your opinion about this trendy ?


What are your opinion about this trendy ?

"trend" - a style or fashion for a given time "Trendy" - something that follows a trend. example: "There's a trend for white shoes currently". "Your shoes are trendy".

.


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