Oct. 10, 2025
The Nun on 7th Avenue
Many years ago, in the northern part of Bogota, exactly on the 7th avenue there was a monastery. It's said that a nun died there in a tragic manner. Since then, she has been seen lurking around the area, especially at 3 a.m.
Some taxi drivers say she makes them stop. They pick her up, but when they turn to ask her a question,she suddenly disappears, leaving the poor drivers pale.
This story is already know by the soldiers and passersby of this place who pass by frightened at this point.
The Nun on 7th Avenue
Many years ago, in the northern part of Bogota, exactly on theon 7th avenue there was a monastery.
A better way to phrase this is "there was a monastery on 7th avenue"
It's said that a nun died there in a tragic manner.
You could also say "a nun tragically died there" is sounds a bit more natural
Since then, she has been seen lurking around the area, especially at 3 a.m.
"Especially" doesn't sound quite right here, it implies that she is extra active during 3am. What I think you mean is that she is often seen at 3am. What you wrote was not wrong it just doesn't fit with the tone of the rest of the story.
Some taxi drivers say she makes them stop.
They pick her up, but when they turn to ask her a question,she suddenly disappears, leaving the poor drivers pale.
This story is already know by the frightened soldiers and passersby of this place who pass by frightened ateople who pass by this pointlace.
The Nun on 7th Avenue
Many years ago, in the northern part of Bogota, exactly on the 7th avenue there was a monastery.
It's said that a nun died there in a tragic manner.
Since then, she has been seen lurking around the area, especially at 3 a.m.
Some taxi drivers say she makes them stop.
They pick her up, but when they turn to ask her a question, she suddenly disappears, leaving the poor drivers pale.
This story is already known by the soldiers and passersby of this place, who pass by frightened at this point.
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Many years ago, in the northern part of Bogota, exactly on the 7th avenue there was a monastery. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Many years ago, in the northern part of Bogota, A better way to phrase this is "there was a monastery on 7th avenue" |
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It's said that a nun died there in a tragic manner. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It's said that a nun died there in a tragic manner. You could also say "a nun tragically died there" is sounds a bit more natural |
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Since then, she has been seen lurking around the area, especially at 3 a.m. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Since then, she has been seen lurking around the area, especially at 3 a.m. "Especially" doesn't sound quite right here, it implies that she is extra active during 3am. What I think you mean is that she is often seen at 3am. What you wrote was not wrong it just doesn't fit with the tone of the rest of the story. |
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Some taxi drivers say she makes them stop. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They pick her up, but when they turn to ask her a question,she suddenly disappears, leaving the poor drivers pale. They pick her up, but when they turn to ask her a question, she suddenly disappears, leaving the poor drivers pale. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This story is already know by the soldiers and passersby of this place who pass by frightened at this point. This story is already known by the soldiers and passersby of this place, who pass by frightened at this point. This story is already know by the frightened soldiers and p |
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