April 24, 2025
Here we go again. Hi! Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are just about misfortunes that happen to me but is what sells, and I wouldn't like to boring you. So story begins with me and a girl, whose name is Fanny. We both go to dance classes. We are dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dance with me. Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny and skinny. But all went to trash after a party, there, some things happened and made it weird. Then we had a break for holly week. I just saw her yesterday, where we danced, but not like always, and I didn´t feel that match I had felt before. Although we danced, it´s not too much, but is a progress- I guess. The teacher wants to change the dance couples, if he does, I don´t know what will happen. I wish things go well between she and me, I really like her and wanna hang out together. Maybe I´ll write you in the next post what happened that night- spoiler, it was like "Project X".
Here we go again.
Hi!
Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are just about misfortunes that happen to me but it's what sells, and I wouldn't like to boringe you.
So story begins with me and a girl, whose name is Fanny.
We both go to dance classes.
We are dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me.
First part doesn't really make sense. What do you mean?
Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny and skinnythin.
skinny sometimes has a negative feeling.
But all went to trassouth after a party, there, some things happened and made it weird.
not wrong but "went to trash" is not an idiomatic phrase. 'went south' is a similar idiomatic
Then we had a break for holly week.
holly week? is that a holiday? do you mean the tree?
I just saw her yesterday, where and we danced, but not like always, and I didn´t feel that match I had felt before.
Although we danced, it´s not too much, but is at is progress- I guess.
The teacher wants to change the dance couples, if he does, I don´t know what will happen.
it is now clear what you mean from earlier. but then it was not clear what 'dance couple' meant to me
I wishant things to go well between shme and meher, I really like her and wanna hang out together.
The lost friendship.
Here we go again.
Hi!
Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are just about misfortunes that happen to me, but it is what sells, and I wouldn't likewant to boringe you.
Alternatively: "You might be thinking that all my posts..."
So the story begins with me and a girl, whose name is Fanny.
We both go to dance classes.
We are dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me.
Present tense verbs in third person should usually end with an "s". "I dance, you dance, she dances, we dance, they dance."
Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny, and skinnylender.
"Skinny" works, but it feels a little more like a health condition. Something like "slender" or "slim" might work better.
But it all went to trash after a party, t. There, some things happened andthat made it weird.
First part isn't wrong, but a more common idiom would be "it all went downhill".
"It all went downhill after a party."
"There", used in this way, would usually start a new sentence.
"and" works at the end here, but "that" is just a little better in this sentence where we are talking about cause and effect.
Then we had a break for holHoly wWeek.
Please ignore this if you do actually mean "Holly". When I looked it up, I could only find "Holy Week", which just happened very recently.
I just saw her yesterday, where and we danced, but not like always, andbefore. I didn´t feel that match I had felt before.
A piece of advice I was given by an English teacher long ago was to always try to only have one "and" per sentence (not including "and's" that are in lists). It isn't something you HAVE to follow every time, especially not in very informal English, but it's a good general rule of thumb for making text feel cleaner.
We didn't mention a place before, so "I just saw her yesterday, where we danced" implies that you saw her IN the place where you two danced. However, something like "I just saw her yesterday in the classroom, where we danced" would imply that you then danced with her right there. (Without that comma separating "classroom" and "where", however, it will be "...in the classroom where we danced", and the meaning will be similar to the first sentence again).
Although we danced, it´s not too wasn't much, b. But is at is progress-, I guess.
The teacher wants to change the dance couples, i. If he does, I don´t know what will happen.
I wishhope things go well between sher and me, because I really like her and wanna hang out togetwith her.
"I wish", in this context, means you wish something had gone differently in the past. But "I hope" means you hope something goes a certain way in the future. "Wish" can also mean hoping for something in the future, but in that case it's pretty formal, and might be formatted differently: "I wish for things to go well...". This feels like something a royal figure or a very poetic person might say.
I've corrected the ending to sound a little more natural. But otherwise, it's not wrong at all!
Maybe I´ll write for you in the next post what happened that night - spoiler, it was like "Project X".
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Overall, very nicely written! I've just touched up a few things to make them sound slightly more natural. But otherwise, I can understand you very well. Nicely done!
The lost friendship.
Here we go again.
Hi!
Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are justonly about misfortunes that happen to me, but that is what sells, and I wouldn't likewant to boringe you.
SoThis story begins with me and a girl, whose name is Fanny.
We both go to dance classes.
We are a dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me.
Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny, and skinnylender.
But all went to trashpieces after a party, t where, some things happened and made it (our interactions) weird.
Then we had a break for holHoly wWeek.
I just saw her yesterday, whereand we danced, but not like always, and I didn´t feel that matchconnection I had felt before.
Although we danced,We danced, and although it´s not too much, buit is a progress-, I guess.
The teacher wants to change the dance couples,; if he does, I don´t know what will happen.
I wish for things to go well between sher and me,. I really like her and wannat to hang out together.
Maybe I´ll write you in the next post and tell what happened that night- s. Spoiler,: it was like "Project X".
Here we go, again.
Maybe you´ll think that all my posts are just about misfortunes that happen to me, but that is what sells, and I wouldn't like to. I don't want to be boring you.
So the story begins with me and a girl, whose name is Fanny.
We both go to dance classes.
We are a dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me.
Moreover, she´s beautiful, funny and skinnpretty.
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We are dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dance with me. We are dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me. First part doesn't really make sense. What do you mean? We are a dance couple We are a dance couple We are dance couples and I like her (a bit) for the way she dances with me. Present tense verbs in third person should usually end with an "s". "I dance, you dance, she dances, we dance, they dance." |
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The teacher wants to change the dance couples, if he does, I don´t know what will happen. The teacher wants to change the dance couples The teacher wants to change the dance couples, if he does, I don´t know what will happen. it is now clear what you mean from earlier. but then it was not clear what 'dance couple' meant to me The teacher wants to change the dance couples |
I wish things go well between she and me, I really like her and wanna hang out together. I wish for things to go well between I w I "I wish", in this context, means you wish something had gone differently in the past. But "I hope" means you hope something goes a certain way in the future. "Wish" can also mean hoping for something in the future, but in that case it's pretty formal, and might be formatted differently: "I wish for things to go well...". This feels like something a royal figure or a very poetic person might say. I've corrected the ending to sound a little more natural. But otherwise, it's not wrong at all! |
Maybe I´ll write you in the next post what happened that night- spoiler, it was like "Project X". Maybe I´ll write you in the next post and tell what happened that night Maybe I´ll write for you in the next post what happened that night - spoiler, it was like "Project X". |
But all went to trash after a party, there, some things happened and made it weird. But all went not wrong but "went to trash" is not an idiomatic phrase. 'went south' is a similar idiomatic
But all went to But it all went to trash after a party First part isn't wrong, but a more common idiom would be "it all went downhill". "It all went downhill after a party." "There", used in this way, would usually start a new sentence. "and" works at the end here, but "that" is just a little better in this sentence where we are talking about cause and effect. |
Then we had a break for holly week. Then we had a break for holly week. holly week? is that a holiday? do you mean the tree? Then we had a break for Then we had a break for Then we had a break for Please ignore this if you do actually mean "Holly". When I looked it up, I could only find "Holy Week", which just happened very recently. |
I just saw her yesterday, where we danced, but not like always, and I didn´t feel that match I had felt before. I just saw her yesterday I just saw her yesterday, I just saw her yesterday I just saw her yesterday A piece of advice I was given by an English teacher long ago was to always try to only have one "and" per sentence (not including "and's" that are in lists). It isn't something you HAVE to follow every time, especially not in very informal English, but it's a good general rule of thumb for making text feel cleaner. We didn't mention a place before, so "I just saw her yesterday, where we danced" implies that you saw her IN the place where you two danced. However, something like "I just saw her yesterday in the classroom, where we danced" would imply that you then danced with her right there. (Without that comma separating "classroom" and "where", however, it will be "...in the classroom where we danced", and the meaning will be similar to the first sentence again). |
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