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I live in othermoved to a country far away ofrom mi familia seven years ago.

Since english tends to include a lot of load words, and speakers find it fun to include phrases from other languages, it's pretty natural to keep "mi familia"

"moved" would be the correct term to use here.
Far FROM

Also, moving to a country automatically implies another country, so there's no need to specificy "other"

The last year, I takedook my vacation days , maybe for onefor about a month, and I went to visit my mother , t. That was very important to mye because , I hate to live without my family , m. My old sister now is a GOODREAT MOTHER , s. She has a Little baby , it is, a girl , and I really love that baby , s. She is so nice, and Ssmart, withand even at only 1 year old, the baby can walk for all the house, and , the last holiall over the house. Since the days I meet that baby , and since that day I wannalast holidy, I've wanted to be a mother, I wantd to have a Llittle baby like her.

wanna is very casual, like somehting you would use when texting. i just changed it to want to to keep things consistend.

I've lived in another country far away ofrom miy familiay for seven years ago.

The last year, I taked my vacation days , maybe for one month, I wentook about a month of vacation to visit my mother , t. That was very important to my because , I hate to liveliving without my family , m. My older sister now is now a GOOD MOTHER , s. She has a Llittle baby , it is a girl ,. I really love that baby , she is so nice, and Ssmart, with. At only 1 year old, the baby can already walk for allround the house, and , the last holidays.Since I meet that baby , and since that day I wanna be a mother,. I want to have a Llittle baby like her.

I live in another country far away ofrom miy familiay since seven years ago.

More natural: I live in another country far away from my family for the past seven years.

The last year, I takedook my vacation days , maybe for one month, I went to visit my mother , t. That was very important to mye because , I hate to live without my family ,. my old sister now is a GOOD MOTHER , she has a Little baby , it is a girl ,. I really love that baby , s. She is so nice, and Ssmart, with. At only 1 year old, the baby can walk forthrough all the house, and , the last holidays I meet that baby , and since that day I wanna be a mother, I want to have a Llittle baby like her.