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April 15, 2025

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The Importance of School Subjects

Every day, I ask myself: in a world full of so many professions, why do I feel so lost, stuck with myself like this?
When I was seven years old, just an ordinary little girl going to school like every other child, I used to think: well, it's school time, so I just have to go. I tried to memorize as much as I could—not to understand, but to pass exams. I crammed as much as possible, hoping to get good grades, to be a well-rounded student.

Back then, my parents didn’t really pay attention to all the subjects. As long as my Math and English scores were good, they were satisfied. Subjects like History, Geography, and Literature just needed to be “not too low.”

And so, for 12 years—and even into university—I followed that same mindset. Looking back now, I realize that my understanding of the world is almost non-existent.

Only now do I see that those subjects we studied as kids were actually gateways to different areas of the world. They were chances to discover what we’re naturally good at, to find what excites us, and to understand the essence of each subject—things that could’ve helped shape our decisions when choosing a university major later on.

Now I realize:

Math trains us to think logically and with structure.

Literature reflects how we perceive the world and gives us the tools to express thoughts with depth.

Music, PE, and Art aren’t just side subjects—they help us explore our passions and talents. Who knows? Maybe you’re meant to become a great artist someday.

History isn’t just about the past. It explains how humanity evolved—our cultures, beliefs, religions, and even political systems are deeply tied to it.

Geography isn't just about maps—it’s about understanding people, a country's strengths (like geopolitics), and even how climate affects health and medicine.

If I could choose again, I’d learn every subject with the mindset of wanting to know and understand the world, not just to chase meaningless numbers.

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Every day, I ask myself: in a world full of so many professions, why do I feel so lost, stuck with myself like this?

Your way of writing it sounds good as well. This is just the way I would say it because the last clause is a bit redundant.

When I was seven years old, just an ordinary little girl going to school like every other child, I used to think: well, it's school time, so I just have to go.

I tried to memorize as much as I could—not to understand, but to pass exams.

I crammed as much as possible, hoping to get good grades, to be a well-rounded student.

Back then, my parents didn’t really pay attention to all the subjects.

As long as my Math and English scores were good, they were satisfied.

Subjects like History, Geography, and Literature just needed to be “not too low.” And so, for 12 years—and even into university—I followed that same mindset.

Looking back now, I realize that my understanding of the world is almost non-existent.

Only now do I see that those subjects we studied as kids were actually gateways to different areas of the world.

They were chances to discover what we’re naturally good at, to find what excites us, and to understand the essence of each subject—things that could’ve helped shape our decisions when choosing a university major later on.

Now I realize: Math trains us to think logically and with structure.

Literature reflects how we perceive the world and gives us the tools to express thoughts with depth.

Music, PE, and Art aren’t just side subjects—they help us explore our passions and talents.

Who knows?

Maybe you’re meant to become a great artist someday.

History isn’t just about the past.

It explains how humanity evolved—our cultures, beliefs, religions, and even political systems are deeply tied to it.

Geography isn't just about maps—it’s about understanding people, a country's strengths (like geopolitics), and even how climate affects health and medicine.

If I could choose again, I’d learn every subject with the mindset of wanting to know and understand the world, not just to chase meaningless numbers.

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This is very readable and well written. If I had to nit-pick, I would say that your use of the colon ":" is a bit supurfluous. I typically only see this character used in very specific circumstances, or often in the title of a work.

Again this is very well written, and I would assume it was written by a native speaker with a high level of education.

The Importance of School Subjects

Every day, I ask myself: in a world full of so many professions, why do I feel so lost, stuck with myself like this?

When I was seven years old, just an ordinary little girl going to school like every other child, I used to think: well, it's school time, so I just have to go.

I tried to memorize as much as I could—not to understand, but to pass exams.

I crammed as much as possible, hoping to get good grades, to be a well-rounded student.

Back then, my parents didn’t really pay attention to all the subjects.

As long as my Math and English scores were good, they were satisfied.

Subjects like History, Geography, and Literature just needed to be “not too low.” And so, for 12 years—and even into university—I followed that same mindset.

Looking back now, I realize that my understanding of the world is almost non-existent.

Only now do I see that those subjects we studied as kids were actually gateways to different areas of the world.

They were chances to discover what we’re naturally good at, to find what excites us, and to understand the essence of each subject—things that could’ve helped shape our decisions when choosing a university major later on.

Now I realize: Math trains us to think logically and with structure.

Literature reflects how we perceive the world and gives us the tools to express thoughts with depth.

Music, PE, and Art aren’t just side subjects—they help us explore our passions and talents.

Who knows?

Maybe you’re meant to become a great artist someday.?

History isn’t just about the past.

It explains how humanity evolved—our cultures, beliefs, religions, and even political systems are deeply tied to it.

Geography isn't just about maps—it’s about understanding people, a country's strengths (like geopolitics), and even how climate affects health and medicine.

If I could choose again, I’d learn every subject with the mindset of wanting to know and understand the world, not just to chase meaningless numbers.

Feedback

Very well written! Your English is very natural!

The Importance of School Subjects


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Every day, I ask myself: in a world full of so many professions, why do I feel so lost, stuck with myself like this?


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Every day, I ask myself: in a world full of so many professions, why do I feel so lost, stuck with myself like this?

Your way of writing it sounds good as well. This is just the way I would say it because the last clause is a bit redundant.

When I was seven years old, just an ordinary little girl going to school like every other child, I used to think: well, it's school time, so I just have to go.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I tried to memorize as much as I could—not to understand, but to pass exams.


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I crammed as much as possible, hoping to get good grades, to be a well-rounded student.


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Back then, my parents didn’t really pay attention to all the subjects.


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As long as my Math and English scores were good, they were satisfied.


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Subjects like History, Geography, and Literature just needed to be “not too low.” And so, for 12 years—and even into university—I followed that same mindset.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Looking back now, I realize that my understanding of the world is almost non-existent.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Only now do I see that those subjects we studied as kids were actually gateways to different areas of the world.


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They were chances to discover what we’re naturally good at, to find what excites us, and to understand the essence of each subject—things that could’ve helped shape our decisions when choosing a university major later on.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Now I realize: Math trains us to think logically and with structure.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Literature reflects how we perceive the world and gives us the tools to express thoughts with depth.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Music, PE, and Art aren’t just side subjects—they help us explore our passions and talents.


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Who knows?


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Maybe you’re meant to become a great artist someday.


Maybe you’re meant to become a great artist someday.?

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

History isn’t just about the past.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It explains how humanity evolved—our cultures, beliefs, religions, and even political systems are deeply tied to it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Geography isn't just about maps—it’s about understanding people, a country's strengths (like geopolitics), and even how climate affects health and medicine.


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If I could choose again, I’d learn every subject with the mindset of wanting to know and understand the world, not just to chase meaningless numbers.


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