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The graph below gives information on the number of participa

The line graph provides data in terms of the number of participants across five recreational activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for twenty-year period between 2000 and 2020.

Overall, as can be witnessed from the diagram, FilmClub was the most common activity choice throughout the whole period, while Amateur Dramatics was the least by the end. Additionally, despite the fact that musical performance appeared almost only in the middle of the time span, it outraced local acting group at the end.

In 2000, MovieClub had around 63 attendees, which made it the most popular among individuals. Except some fluctuations, in 2010, the figure saw a rise, reaching its peak at about 76 people in the final year. Meanwhile, initially, the disparity between community theater and table tennis was approximately 27 and 17 members, respectively. However, the gap between them narrowed down until 2010, where both activities had exactly 20 participants. After 10 years, the former experienced a steady decline, while the latter one demonstrated a considerable increase, having less than 10 individuals involved and around 53 players, respectively.


Musical show had no members at the first five years; however, from 2005, this recreation grew steadily, reaching almost 20 attendees by the end of the given period. In addition, Martial Arts, despite some fluctuations, kept its initial number of entrants about 35 members over the duration of 20 years.


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The graph below gives information on the number of participants

The line graph provides data in terms of the number of participants across five recreational activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for a twenty-year period between 2000 and 2020.

Overall, as can be witnessed from the diagram, FilmClub was the most common activity choice throughout the whole period, while Amateur Dramatics was the least bycommon towards the end.

"towards" makes it clearer that this is about data in a time scale

Additionally, despite the fact that musical performance appeared almost only in the middle of the time span, it outraced local acting group at the end.

In 2000, MovieClub had around 63 attendees, which made it the most popular among individuals.

Except for some fluctuations, in 2010, the figure saw a rise, reaching its peak at about 76 people in the final year.

Meanwhile, initially, the disparity between community theater and table tennis was approximately 27 and 17 members, respectively.

However, the gap between them narrowed down until 2010, where both activities had exactly 20 participants.

After 10 years, the former experienced a steady decline, while the latter one demonstrated a considerable increase, having less than 10 individuals involved and around 53 players, respectively.

Musical show had no members at the first five years; however, from 2005, this recreation grew steadily, reaching almost 20 attendees by the end of the given period.

In addition, Martial Arts, despite some fluctuations, kept its initial number of entrants about 35 members over the duration of 20 years.

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The graph below gives information on the number of participa


The graph below gives information on the number of participants

The line graph provides data in terms of the number of participants across five recreational activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for twenty-year period between 2000 and 2020.


The line graph provides data in terms of the number of participants across five recreational activities at one social center in Melbourne, Australia for a twenty-year period between 2000 and 2020.

Overall, as can be witnessed from the diagram, FilmClub was the most common activity choice throughout the whole period, while Amateur Dramatics was the least by the end.


Overall, as can be witnessed from the diagram, FilmClub was the most common activity choice throughout the whole period, while Amateur Dramatics was the least bycommon towards the end.

"towards" makes it clearer that this is about data in a time scale

Additionally, despite the fact that musical performance appeared almost only in the middle of the time span, it outraced local acting group at the end.


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In 2000, MovieClub had around 63 attendees, which made it the most popular among individuals.


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Except some fluctuations, in 2010, the figure saw a rise, reaching its peak at about 76 people in the final year.


Except for some fluctuations, in 2010, the figure saw a rise, reaching its peak at about 76 people in the final year.

Meanwhile, initially, the disparity between community theater and table tennis was approximately 27 and 17 members, respectively.


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However, the gap between them narrowed down until 2010, where both activities had exactly 20 participants.


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After 10 years, the former experienced a steady decline, while the latter one demonstrated a considerable increase, having less than 10 individuals involved and around 53 players, respectively.


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Musical show had no members at the first five years; however, from 2005, this recreation grew steadily, reaching almost 20 attendees by the end of the given period.


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In addition, Martial Arts, despite some fluctuations, kept its initial number of entrants about 35 members over the duration of 20 years.


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