I'm a student in law and I finished my class in mMay.

I think 'law student' would look better

After I passed my exams for reward me I decided to, I decided to reward myself by travel ing around the world this summer.

My first destination is Bali because I want to discover another culture and because I read a book about the city and that makde me want to see it, the population, and the patrimony.

The comma before 'and' is optional

Then Dublin, because of hits town, which is very old and looks a like a city in the Middle Ages, and to taste the Irish beer.

Wrong pronouns. Commas are important.

And Ffinally, I always wanted to visit Canada for the landscapes, the people who are known for their kindnests, and to eat theheir love for poutine.

Spelt 'kindness' wrong. 'Eat the poutine' is grammatically incorrect

The aim of my travel is to practice my English, discovered new countryies and people.

Of course, it is a fake story, but let me dream !

Again, commas

The dDream

I'm a student in law and I finished my classes in mMay.

It's more common to say "I'm a law student"

After Is a reward for passeding my exams for reward me I decided to travel in the world this summer.

My first destination is Bali because I want to discover another culture and because I read a book about the city and that makde me want to go see it, the population and the patrimony.

Then Dublin because of his town which isit's a very old andtown, looks a like a city infrom the Middle Ages, and because I want to taste the Irish beer.

And F, finally, I have always wanted to visit Canada for the landscapes, the kind people who are known for their kindest, and to eat the poutine.

The aim of my travel is to practice my English, and discovered new countryies and people.

Of course it is a fake story's just a dream but let me dream fantasize!