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Dec. 30, 2024

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The Corn Chips Fritos (110)

I received a package from my friend in the US two days ago. It was a Christmas gift.

There were three picture books, a body moisturizer, and lots of snacks in it.

Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.

Since I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try it.

I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box.

There were also a can of bean dip and a can of jarapeno cheddar dip in it.

At first, I just tried Fritos as it is, and then I tried it with bean dip.

I loved the chips, but bean dip wasn't my favorite.

However, it's not something that I can't eat.

I'll probably eat all of it. It might be an acquired taste.


二日前、アメリカの友達から荷物を受け取りました。それは、クリスマスギフトでした。

箱の中には、本が三冊、ボディクリーム、そしてたくさんのスナック菓子が入っていました。

実は、事前に「フリトース」というお菓子を送ってほしいと頼んでありました。

Kevin's English Roomのユーチューブで彼らがフリト―スを食べているのを見て以来、ずーっと食べたかったんです。

箱の中のフリト―スを見たとき、めっちゃテンション上がりました。(ワクワクしました)

ビーンディップと、ハラペーニョチェダーディップも一緒に入っていました。

まず最初に、フリト―スだけでそのまま食べてみて、それからビーンディップと一緒に食べてみました。

チップスは、とても美味しかったんですが、ビーンズディップは、すごく美味しいわけじゃなかったです。

でも、食べられないほどまずいわけじゃないです。

多分、全部食べると思います。だんだん好きになる味かも。

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The Corn Chips Fritos

I received a package from my friend in the US two days ago.

It was a Christmas gift.

There were three picture books, a body moisturizer, and lots of snacks in it.

Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.

SEver since I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" YouTube channel video where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try it.

I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box.

There wereas also a can of bean dip and a can of jarlapeno cheddar dip in it.

At first, I just tried the Fritos as it ison their own, and then I tried ithem with the bean dip.

I loved the chips, but the bean dip wasn't my favorite.

However, it's not something that I cawon't eat.

I'll probably eat all of it.

It might be an acquired taste.

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I'm glad to hear that you tried Fritos and liked them! It's been a very long time since I've eaten them, but I used to like Fritos when I was a kid.

What other American snacks did you get? 😄

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sachisachi

Dec. 31, 2024

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I got Funyuns, Sun Chips, and Honey BBQ flavored Fritos. My favorite is Funyuns!!! What would you recommend ? Have I asked you this question before?

Thank you for your corrections!

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Ashitaka

Jan. 1, 2025

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That's great! I don't remember if you've asked me before. 🤔 But I like Rold Gold pretzels and Goldfish cheddar cheese crackers. 🐠🧀

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sachisachi

Jan. 3, 2025

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I've never tried Rold Gold pretzels, but I bought Goldfish cheddar cheese on Amazon last year. it was good and cute!

The Corn Chips Fritos

I received a package from my friend in the US two days ago.

It was a Christmas gift.

There were three picture books, a body moisturizerlotion, and lots of snacks in it.

Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.

"Additionally" fits better here than "Actually"

SEver since I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try it.

I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box.

There were also a can of bean dip and a can of jarapeno cheddar dip in it.

At first, I just tried Fritos as it is, and then I tried it with bean dip.

I loved the chips, but the bean dip wasn't my favorite.

you're very diplomatic

However, it's not something that I can't eat.

I'll probably eat all of it.

It might be an acquired taste.

Feedback

Fantastic! Keep it up

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sachisachi

Dec. 31, 2024

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Thank you so much for your corrections and the new word "diplomatic." Interesting word. I'll add it to my vocabulary.

Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.

SinceAfter I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try ithem.

You can also say "I've always wanted to try them since watching a youtube video called "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos.

I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box.

There wereas also a can of bean dip and a can of jarlapeno cheddarese dip in it.

Cheddar is correct but I think cheese sounds better.

At first, I just tried the Fritos as it isthey are, and then I tried ithem with bean dip.

However, it's not something that I cawon't eat.

Corrected to avoid having a double negative in the sentence.

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It sounds so fun to exchange packages with friends! What did you think of the cheese dip?

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sachisachi

Dec. 31, 2024

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I haven't tried the cheese dip yet, I'm going to try it soon. Thank you so much for your corrections!

I'll probably eat all of it.


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It might be an acquired taste.


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There were also a can of bean dip and a can of jarapeno cheddar dip in it.


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There wereas also a can of bean dip and a can of jarlapeno cheddarese dip in it.

Cheddar is correct but I think cheese sounds better.

There wereas also a can of bean dip and a can of jarlapeno cheddar dip in it.

At first, I just tried Fritos as it is, and then I tried it with bean dip.


At first, I just tried Fritos as it is, and then I tried it with bean dip.

At first, I just tried the Fritos as it isthey are, and then I tried ithem with bean dip.

At first, I just tried the Fritos as it ison their own, and then I tried ithem with the bean dip.

I loved the chips, but bean dip isn't my favorite.


However, it's not something that I can't eat.


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However, it's not something that I cawon't eat.

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However, it's not something that I cawon't eat.

I loved the chips, but bean dip wasn't my favorite.


I loved the chips, but the bean dip wasn't my favorite.

you're very diplomatic

I loved the chips, but the bean dip wasn't my favorite.

There were also bean dip and jarapeno cheddar dip in it.


Actually, I've told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.


Since I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try it.


SEver since I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try it.

SinceAfter I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try ithem.

You can also say "I've always wanted to try them since watching a youtube video called "Kevin's English Room" where they were eating Fritos.

SEver since I watched the YouTube video "Kevin's English Room" YouTube channel video where they were eating Fritos, I've always wanted to try it.

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I received a package from my friend in the US two days ago.


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It was a Christmas gift.


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There were three picture books, a body moisturizer, and lots of snacks in it.


There were three picture books, a body moisturizerlotion, and lots of snacks in it.

There were three picture books, a body moisturizer, and lots of snacks in it.

Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.


Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.

Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.

"Additionally" fits better here than "Actually"

Actually, I had told my friend to send me a chips called Fritos beforehand.

I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box.


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I was so excited when I saw Fritos in the box.

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