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busudou

June 11, 2025

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The continued of yesterday

From June 7 to 8 , I went to Kagawa prefecture with my father.
Actually , there was another big purpose.
It was to go to konpira mountain.
There was many different things there such as famous hot spring , famous shrine, food and hotel.
The Konpira hot spring was the best hot spring in my life.
The hotel that I went to has big hot spring , there wasn't crowed and very confortable.
The food shop near the hotel was also good .
This place is famous for chicken with bones and also udon.
After taking bath, we were going to eat those in midnight.
Matching of coke and chicken were very good combination.
I remember this taste.
The Konpira shrine has very beautiful nature.
I like bird voice , especially Japanese bush warbler, This voice made me calm.
I want to go to there again.


6月の7日から8にちに、父と香川県に行ってきた。
実はもう一つ大きな目的があった。
それは金毘羅山に行くことだ。
そこには有名な温泉や有名な神社、食べ物やホテルといったたくさんのものがある。
金毘羅の温泉は人生の中でいちばんの温泉だった。
私が行ったホテルは大きな温泉があり、そこは混んでなくてとても快適だった。
ホテルの近くにのレストランもとても良かった。
その場所は骨付きチキンやうどんが有名です。
チキンとコーラの組み合わせはとても最高です。
あの味は最高だ。
金毘羅神社は自然が綺麗です。
わたしは鳥の声が好きです、特にうぐいす
また行きたいです。

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The cContinued ofrom yesterday.

From June 7th to 8 the 8th, I went to Kagawa prefecture with my father.

Actually , there was another big purposeimportant reason.

It wasnted to go to kKonpira mountain.

There wasare many different things there such as famous hot spring s, famous shrines, food and hotels.

The Konpira hot spring was the best hot spring inof my life.

The hotel that I went to has had a big hot spring , ithere wasn't crowded andthere and was very conmfortable.

The food shoptalls near the hotel wasere also good .

Thisat place is famous for chicken with bones and also udonfor udon noodles.

This, if you are writing it as if you are still there, otherwise 'that' if you've already come back.

After taking a bath, we were going to eat those inat midnight.

Matching of cCoke and chicken were a very good combination.

I remember thise taste.

You could say that too.

The nature surrounding Konpira shrine hais very beautiful nature.

I like bird voice song, especially the sound of the Japanese bush warbler, This voice made me. It's chirping makes me feel calm.

I want to go to there again.

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Great going, I just brushed it up a little bit.

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busudou

June 12, 2025

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Thank you .I learn important mean "this"and "that"

The continuedation of yesterday

From June 7 to 8 , I went to Kagawa prefecture with my father.

Actually , there was another big purpose.

It was to go to kKonpira mMountain.

There wasere many different things there, such as a famous hot spring , a famous shrine, food, and hotels.

The Konpira hot spring was the best hot spring in my life.

I think it would be more natural to say "The Konpira Hot Spring was the best hot spring I've ever been to in my life".

The hotel that I went to has a big hot spring , there. It wasn't very crowded, and it was very conmfortable.

The food shoprestaurant near the hotel was also good .

This place is famous for chicken with bones and also udon.

After taking a bath, we were going to eat those insome at midnight.

"We were going" sounds like you intended to go eat at the restaurant, but didn't end up going. If you did actually eat at the restaurant, I would say something like "After taking a bath, we went to eat there at midnight."

MatchingThe combination of coke and chicken werewas very good combination.

"coke" without the capitalisation is ok to use in casual writing, but be aware that "coke" can also be slang for "cocaine"! If you want to remove ambiguity, you could write "Coke" or "Coca-Cola"

I remember this taste.

"I remember this taste" doesn't express any positive emotion towards the taste. If you want to express that the Coke and chicken tasted good, then you could write "I really like how it tasted." or "The taste was amazing/The taste was the best."

If you want to express that the taste was very good and mention something about remembering it, you could say "I'll never forget how good it tasted" or "I still remember how good it tasted."

The nature (or natural scenery) in Konpira shrine hwas very beautiful nature.

I liked the bird voice calls, especially the Japanese bush warbler,. This voice made me feel calm.

I don't think we use "bird voices" much. We're more likely to use "bird sounds" or "birdsong" or even "bird calls".

I want to go to there again.

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busudou

June 12, 2025

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Thank you
I wonder coke
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Coke I learn

The Konpira shrine has very beautiful nature.


The nature (or natural scenery) in Konpira shrine hwas very beautiful nature.

The nature surrounding Konpira shrine hais very beautiful nature.

I like bird voice , especially Japanese bush warbler, This voice made me calm.


I liked the bird voice calls, especially the Japanese bush warbler,. This voice made me feel calm.

I don't think we use "bird voices" much. We're more likely to use "bird sounds" or "birdsong" or even "bird calls".

I like bird voice song, especially the sound of the Japanese bush warbler, This voice made me. It's chirping makes me feel calm.

I want to go to there again.


I want to go to there again.

I want to go to there again.

The continued of yesterday


The continuedation of yesterday

The cContinued ofrom yesterday.

From June 7 to 8 , I went to Kagawa prefecture with my father.


From June 7 to 8 , I went to Kagawa prefecture with my father.

From June 7th to 8 the 8th, I went to Kagawa prefecture with my father.

Actually , there was another big purpose.


Actually , there was another big purpose.

Actually , there was another big purposeimportant reason.

It was to go to konpira mountain.


It was to go to kKonpira mMountain.

It wasnted to go to kKonpira mountain.

There was many different things there such as famous hot spring , famous shrine, food and hotel.


There wasere many different things there, such as a famous hot spring , a famous shrine, food, and hotels.

There wasare many different things there such as famous hot spring s, famous shrines, food and hotels.

The Konpira hot spring was the best hot spring in my life.


The Konpira hot spring was the best hot spring in my life.

I think it would be more natural to say "The Konpira Hot Spring was the best hot spring I've ever been to in my life".

The Konpira hot spring was the best hot spring inof my life.

The hotel that I went to has big hot spring , there wasn't crowed and very confortable.


The hotel that I went to has a big hot spring , there. It wasn't very crowded, and it was very conmfortable.

The hotel that I went to has had a big hot spring , ithere wasn't crowded andthere and was very conmfortable.

The food shop near the hotel was also good .


The food shoprestaurant near the hotel was also good .

The food shoptalls near the hotel wasere also good .

This place is famous for chicken with bones and also udon.


This place is famous for chicken with bones and also udon.

Thisat place is famous for chicken with bones and also udonfor udon noodles.

This, if you are writing it as if you are still there, otherwise 'that' if you've already come back.

After taking bath, we were going to eat those in midnight.


After taking a bath, we were going to eat those insome at midnight.

"We were going" sounds like you intended to go eat at the restaurant, but didn't end up going. If you did actually eat at the restaurant, I would say something like "After taking a bath, we went to eat there at midnight."

After taking a bath, we were going to eat those inat midnight.

Matching of coke and chicken were very good combination.


MatchingThe combination of coke and chicken werewas very good combination.

"coke" without the capitalisation is ok to use in casual writing, but be aware that "coke" can also be slang for "cocaine"! If you want to remove ambiguity, you could write "Coke" or "Coca-Cola"

Matching of cCoke and chicken were a very good combination.

I remember this taste.


I remember this taste.

"I remember this taste" doesn't express any positive emotion towards the taste. If you want to express that the Coke and chicken tasted good, then you could write "I really like how it tasted." or "The taste was amazing/The taste was the best." If you want to express that the taste was very good and mention something about remembering it, you could say "I'll never forget how good it tasted" or "I still remember how good it tasted."

I remember thise taste.

You could say that too.

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