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I am trying to improve my different skills.

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Today I want to describe the chaos that arrivppeared toin my head.

As another user has noted, the word "chaos" feels a little strange and dramatic here.

I am trying to improve my different skills.

Between a subject like "I" and a verb in -ing form, you need 'am', 'are', or 'is'. "I *am* trying", "you *are* trying", etc. Think of an -ing form verb as a noun.

"my" isn't wrong here, but it isn't needed in this sentence.

I am constantly search paths foring for ways of doing it.

For actions which are being done by the speaker right now, native English speakers often use verbs in -ing form.

To search ______ means you are trying to find something IN ______. To try and find ______, you would say you "search *for* ______".

Eventually, my brain gets tired.

I must study to work with restfind out how to take breaks from working.

Whenever I hear the word "study", an image enters my mind of sitting at a desk for hours with books and open notebooks filled with notes. I would "study" a general field like a language, but I would simply "find out" anything simpler.

I'm not entirely sure what you mean by "to work with rest". Apologies if this isn't quite what you meant.

Today I want to describe the chaos that arrived tothoughts that ran through my head.

I don't think "chaos" is the word you want to use here. "Chaos" would mean a bunch of conflicting, disordered thoughts, and/or extremely panicked thoughts resulting from a dire situation. The thoughts you describe after this are harmonious and cohesive with each other.

So, I actually want to become better.

I'm trying to improve my different skills.

I constantly search for paths for itto do so.

Eventually, my brain tireds.

The previous sentences are describing habitual actions, so switching to past tense sounds a bit strange. Are you tired from thinking all these thoughts or from doing the habitual actions? If it's the latter, my correction is appropriate. If the former, I'd clarify with "Eventually, my brain tired from all these thoughts." or something.

I must study tolearn to balance work with rest.

"Learn" is better for knowledge you gain through experience, "study" sounds like you're going to read books and do a bunch of research.
We don't say "to work with rest," when we use "with" with the verb "work" it means using a tool/means to do the work (ie. work with your hands, work with a light), doing the work together with someone else (ie. work with a partner), or putting some aspect into the work (ie. work with pride, work with diligence).