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alicja20012

June 10, 2025

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The beginning of the story

The day was rainny. It was great to waste time at home and do nothing. Of course in older days it could be more productive such as reading a book or prepare the preserves but now it usually mean that you scroll social media. So you turn on zombie mode and the time flies. Awful thing.
The worst thing is that you are conscious of that but who cares?
Your brain cares. It change to fried chips and your condition to get te knowledge stay poor.
So how to start protect themselves from that?
Leave smartphone away and look how the time fly slower - such as in the rolex watch.

Corrections

The day was rainny.

It was great to waste time at home and do nothing.

This sentence does not really make sense. I think you meant to say that it was a "great chance to stay at home" rather than go out. You would not use the word "great" when talking about something negative, such as wasting time.

Of course in older days, (instead of saying "in older days" you could say "10 years ago") it could be more productive, such as reading a book or prepare theing the preserves (not sure what you mean by preserves) but now it usually means that you scroll social media.

So you turn onswitch to zombie mode and the time flies.

The worst thing is that you are conscious of that but who cares?

It changes to fried chips and your condition to get teability to gain knowledge stay poorworsens.

So how todo you start protect themselvesing yourself from that?

Leave your smartphone away and look how the time flyies slower - such as in the ra Rolex watch.

The beginning of the story


The day was rainny.


The day was rainny.

It was great to waste time at home and do nothing.


It was great to waste time at home and do nothing.

This sentence does not really make sense. I think you meant to say that it was a "great chance to stay at home" rather than go out. You would not use the word "great" when talking about something negative, such as wasting time.

Of course in older days it could be more productive such as reading a book or prepare the preserves but now it usually mean that you scroll social media.


Of course in older days, (instead of saying "in older days" you could say "10 years ago") it could be more productive, such as reading a book or prepare theing the preserves (not sure what you mean by preserves) but now it usually means that you scroll social media.

So you turn on zombie mode and the time flies.


So you turn onswitch to zombie mode and the time flies.

Awful thing.


The worst thing is that you are conscious of that but who cares?


The worst thing is that you are conscious of that but who cares?

Your brain cares.


It change to fried chips and your condition to get te knowledge stay poor.


It changes to fried chips and your condition to get teability to gain knowledge stay poorworsens.

So how to start protect themselves from that?


So how todo you start protect themselvesing yourself from that?

Leave smartphone away and look how the time fly slower - such as in the rolex watch.


Leave your smartphone away and look how the time flyies slower - such as in the ra Rolex watch.

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