Oct. 4, 2025
The astronomy is very important, start at past with the Incas peoples, they haved conheciment about the sun, the moon, they were a dessenvovied peoples. But in the 1500 periode, they were died, theafed, and ended forever, because of portugueses, the today astronomy, we are study Marte, we went to moon already, have a scientifics equipaments, have 2 special agencies: NASA and SpaceX.
The astronomy it's very studied, have a many job adverstiments, how astronomy teatcher, pilot of rocket, asterodies study, have a many olynpiads scientifics of this science.
The Astronomy
No "The" will be there, since The does not come before subjects
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Again, no The. No need for "at past" and after the Incas, people is not necessary. If the proper noun is given and the pronoun for it is next to it, the pronoun is useless. It is not "haved", it is "had". What is conheciment? Anyway, If there are only two objects, then "and" will join then, not a comma. After moon, there should be a period. What is dessenvovied? And "people" is already plural so no need for s.
But in the 1500 periode, they werehad died, theafed, and ended forever, because of pthe Portugueses, the, today astronomy, we are studying Martes, we went tohave already gone to the moon already, have a scientifics equipaments, and have 2 special agencies: NASA and SpaceX.
Period, not periode. It is they had died, not they were died. Unless you meant they were dead. Theafed? Spelling of Portuguese is wrong. No, The before today. We are studying because it is the present continuous tense. Marte? Did you mean Mars? The before moon, went turns into have already gone. Not scientifics, scientific. Equipment is a common noun so no s. There should be and before have.
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In this context, it should be it's, not is. No article before a quantifier like "many". Astronomy is not plural, so had. Wrong spelling of teacher, A before rocket. Wrong spelling of asteroid, Wrong spelling of Olympiad. Word order is jumbled.
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The Astronomy
"The" is not needed in this instance.
The aAstronomy is very important, start at past with the Incas peoples, they haved conheciment about. It was first studied by the Incas. They were familiar with movements of the sun, the and moon, theyand were a dessenvovied peoplesveloped civilization.
I'm unclear on a few of the words you've used. This is my best attempt; if you want to try different words let me know.
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You could also say "in the 1500s". Again, guessing a bit at the intended meaning of some of these words.
The aAstronomy it's very studied, havpopular and there are many job adverstiments, howopportunities, such as astronomy teatcher, pilot of rocket, asterodies study, havrocket pilot, and space research. There are many oOlynmpiads scientifics of this science.
I assume by "Olympiads" you mean powerful or influential? Olympiads isn't the most common term, but it does convey a strong message.
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The Astronomy
"The" is not needed in this instance.
No "The" will be there, since The does not come before subjects |
The astronomy is very important, start at past with the Incas peoples, they haved conheciment about the sun, the moon, they were a dessenvovied peoples.
I'm unclear on a few of the words you've used. This is my best attempt; if you want to try different words let me know.
Again, no The. No need for "at past" and after the Incas, people is not necessary. If the proper noun is given and the pronoun for it is next to it, the pronoun is useless. It is not "haved", it is "had". What is conheciment? Anyway, If there are only two objects, then "and" will join then, not a comma. After moon, there should be a period. What is dessenvovied? And "people" is already plural so no need for s. |
But in the 1500 periode, they were died, theafed, and ended forever, because of portugueses, the today astronomy, we are study Marte, we went to moon already, have a scientifics equipaments, have 2 special agencies: NASA and SpaceX. But in the 15 You could also say "in the 1500s". Again, guessing a bit at the intended meaning of some of these words. But in the 1500 period Period, not periode. It is they had died, not they were died. Unless you meant they were dead. Theafed? Spelling of Portuguese is wrong. No, The before today. We are studying because it is the present continuous tense. Marte? Did you mean Mars? The before moon, went turns into have already gone. Not scientifics, scientific. Equipment is a common noun so no s. There should be and before have. |
The astronomy it's very studied, have a many job adverstiments, how astronomy teatcher, pilot of rocket, asterodies study, have a many olynpiads scientifics of this science.
I assume by "Olympiads" you mean powerful or influential? Olympiads isn't the most common term, but it does convey a strong message.
In this context, it should be it's, not is. No article before a quantifier like "many". Astronomy is not plural, so had. Wrong spelling of teacher, A before rocket. Wrong spelling of asteroid, Wrong spelling of Olympiad. Word order is jumbled. |
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