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johnnymnemonic

Sept. 28, 2025

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That's why I learn English

I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common job. I really want to become a system architect. The most people in my country just want to be a simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development. I was bored in college. All of the study program on our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country. But I dreamed about C++ and Linux kernel programing. Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" of lemons which life gave me. I concentrated on math and an algorithms. Math has given me a better lifeway than if I had just been a web coder. Currently, I have time and good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I job instead of a getting a high education).

Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to get more. That's the reason why I learn English so intense. Thank you for your help!

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That's why I learn English

I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common job.

"common" and "difficult" are not exactly contrasting, so this sentence sounds a bit odd.

I really want to become a system architect.

The mMost people in my country just want to be a simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development.

I was bored in college.

All of the study program oin our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country.

But I dreamed about C++ and Linux kernel programing.

Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" of the lemons which life gave me.

I concentrated on math and an algorithms.

Math has given me a better path in lifeway than if I had just been a web coder.

"lifeway" isn't a word.

Currently, I have time and good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I job instead of a getting a high education).

What is "high education?" Does this mean graduating with good grades?

Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to get more.

That's the reason why I learnpractice English so intensely.

Practice makes more sense here, to really emphasize that it is hard work and toilsome.

Thank you for your help!

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These sounded great! Really, your English is really great! Keep it up, and work on creating more complex sentence structures and just keep reviewing grammar and vocabulary to get better! Cheers!

I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common jobs.

I really want to become a system architect.

The mMost people in my country just want to be a simple basic programmers without any challenges and without continuous professional development.

I was bored in college.

All of thThe entire study program oin our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country.

But I dreamed about C++ and Linux kernel programing.

Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" ofwith the lemons which life gave me.

I concentrated on math and an algorithms.

Math has given me a better lifeway path than if I had just been a web coder.

Currently, I have the time, and good a chance to get the perfect higher education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I jobworked instead of a getting a higher education).

Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to geto for more.

That's the reason why I learn English so intense.at such an intense pace / That's the reason I study English so intensely / That's the reason I go so intense with English

Thank you for your help!

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Smart! Options in life! Well done.

That's wWhy I learn English

I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common job.

"a" would be used if the phrase following it were singular, but "tasks" is plural

I really want to become a system architect.

The mostMost of the people in my country just want to be a simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development.

- Use "of" to describe that you are talking about "a part" of the people of your country. in this case "the part" is "most" of the country

I was bored in college.

All of the study program os in our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country.

"in" instead of "on" since we are talking about the programs that you department has (the programs within the department"

But I dreamed about C++ and Linux kernel programing.

Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" ofut of the lemons whichthat life gave me.

Commonly we don't use this sentence structure when talking about the common idiom "when life gives you lemons, make lemonade." But grammatically, its correct.

I concentrated on math and aon algorithms.

Would use "an" if it was a singular algorithm.

Math has given me a better path in lifeway than if I had just been a web coder.

Lifeway is not a word we use in english. I wrote an option for what I think you were trying to say?

Currently, I have time and a good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, which I got them while Ibecause I got a job instead of a getting a higher education).

- Instead of "chance", the word "opportunity" might be better here
- Do you mean higher education (like a college degree) or a level of education that is prestigious/high quality?
- If its prestige --> I have time and a good opportunity to receive a prestigious education in Computer science.

Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to get more.

That's the reason why I learn English so intensely.

Intensely is an adverb describing the verb learn (adverbs describe verbs)

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Your vocabulary is strong and you can convey meaning well! Just some small grammar things that can be improved. Liked the use of the idiom!

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johnnymnemonic

Sept. 29, 2025

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Thank you for your review! I appreciate it. I'll try to write better.

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Needmorespeed

Sept. 29, 2025

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I actually don't think anything's wrong with how the person used the idiom, since the quotation marks around "made lemonade" indicate that the idiom is being manipulated for non-standard use. The same way we'd alter an idiom in real life and use hand gestures to indicate that it's an alteration of an otherwise inflexible string of words. Their sentence just needed a grammar patch or two :)

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I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common job.


I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common job.

"a" would be used if the phrase following it were singular, but "tasks" is plural

I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common jobs.

I don't understand why I prefer a difficult tasks instead of common job.

"common" and "difficult" are not exactly contrasting, so this sentence sounds a bit odd.

I was bored in college.


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Currently, I have time and good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I job instead of a getting a high education).


Currently, I have time and a good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, which I got them while Ibecause I got a job instead of a getting a higher education).

- Instead of "chance", the word "opportunity" might be better here - Do you mean higher education (like a college degree) or a level of education that is prestigious/high quality? - If its prestige --> I have time and a good opportunity to receive a prestigious education in Computer science.

Currently, I have the time, and good a chance to get the perfect higher education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I jobworked instead of a getting a higher education).

Currently, I have time and good chance to get the perfect high education in Computer Science (because I have money and experience, I got them while I job instead of a getting a high education).

What is "high education?" Does this mean graduating with good grades?

Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to get more.


Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to get more.

Although I can just study at the best University in Belarus/Russia, I want to geto for more.

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That's the reason why I learn English so intense.


That's the reason why I learn English so intensely.

Intensely is an adverb describing the verb learn (adverbs describe verbs)

That's the reason why I learn English so intense.at such an intense pace / That's the reason I study English so intensely / That's the reason I go so intense with English

That's the reason why I learnpractice English so intensely.

Practice makes more sense here, to really emphasize that it is hard work and toilsome.

Thank you for your help!


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I really want to become a system architect.


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The most people in my country just want to be a simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development.


The mostMost of the people in my country just want to be a simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development.

- Use "of" to describe that you are talking about "a part" of the people of your country. in this case "the part" is "most" of the country

The mMost people in my country just want to be a simple basic programmers without any challenges and without continuous professional development.

The mMost people in my country just want to be a simple programmers without challenges and continuous professional development.

All of the study program on our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country.


All of the study program os in our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country.

"in" instead of "on" since we are talking about the programs that you department has (the programs within the department"

All of thThe entire study program oin our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country.

All of the study program oin our department was built on the web-stack — it was in demand in my country.

But I dreamed about C++ and Linux kernel programing.


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Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" of lemons which life gave me.


Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" ofut of the lemons whichthat life gave me.

Commonly we don't use this sentence structure when talking about the common idiom "when life gives you lemons, make lemonade." But grammatically, its correct.

Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" ofwith the lemons which life gave me.

Of course I was driven, and "made lemonade" of the lemons which life gave me.

I concentrated on math and an algorithms.


I concentrated on math and aon algorithms.

Would use "an" if it was a singular algorithm.

I concentrated on math and an algorithms.

I concentrated on math and an algorithms.

Math has given me a better lifeway than if I had just been a web coder.


Math has given me a better path in lifeway than if I had just been a web coder.

Lifeway is not a word we use in english. I wrote an option for what I think you were trying to say?

Math has given me a better lifeway path than if I had just been a web coder.

Math has given me a better path in lifeway than if I had just been a web coder.

"lifeway" isn't a word.

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