Trying to make my Eexpression more natural Trying to make my expression more natural

Hello, my internet friends! Hello, my internet friends!

Hello my internet friends! Hello my internet friends!

I would use a comma to write this "Hello, my internet friends!", but I can't find a definitive source saying no comma is wrong, so it should be fine.

I have been learneding English for decades since I was in primary school. I have been learning English for decades since I was in primary school.

I have learned English for decades, ever since I was in primary school. I have learned English for decades, ever since I was in primary school.

'since' isn't wrong, but feels very casual. 'Ever since' feels more natural in this context.

I have learned English for decades, since I was in primary school. I have learned English for decades, since I was in primary school.

This feels a little more natural, but it would make sense anyway, so it's not a big problem at all 👍

But I have never talked to people within English, and my listening is terrible. But I have never talked to people in English, and my listening is terrible.

But I never talked to people with English, and my listening is terrible. But I never talked to people with English, and my listening is terrible.

Same as before. I recommend that, instead of using a full stop/period ( . ) between this and the previous line, use a comma instead to make it flow much more naturally.

I realisezed I must to really use English to write and chat, and do not waorry about whether my expression is correct or not. I realized I must really use English to write and chat, and not worry about whether my expression is correct or not.

I realised I must to really use English to write and chat, and do not waorry about whether my expressions are correct or not. I realised I must really use English to write and chat, and not worry about whether my expressions are correct or not.

Americans would spell it 'realized', but I'm Canadian, so I approve :) "I do not worry" would mean that you never worry. With 'must', you don't include the do. "I must not worry".

I realise I must to really use English to write and, chat and do not waorry about whether my expression correct or not. I realise I must to really use English to write, chat and do not worry about whether my expression correct or not.

When listing, use 'and' before the very last item. Example: Dogs, cats, AND fish. The only other thing was a minor spelling mistake. 凄い！

So, I'm here! So, I'm here!

So I'm here I am! So here I am!

It works, but this sounds much more natural. Also, putting a full stop/period in front of, or starting a sentence with a conjunction can make it feel clunky

I need to thank DeepSeek, it for bringsing mye here. I need to thank DeepSeek for bringing me here.

I need to thank DeepSeek,; it brings my here. I need to thank DeepSeek; it brings my here.

Could also write "I need to thank DeepSeek since it brought my here." How you wrote it comes across quite formal.

I need to thank DeepSeek, it bringsought mye here. I need to thank DeepSeek, it brought me here.

'brought' is the past-tense form of 'bring'. Also, 'my' is a possessive pronoun showing ownership over something, example: 'My cat.'. For this context, you need to use the personal pronoun 'me'. You were very close though!

I expect to help each other and make a progress together. I expect to help each other and make progress together.

I expect to help each other and make a progress together. I expect to help each other and make progress together.

Progress is not something you can have one of. It's 'not countable'.

I expect to help each other and make a progress together. I expect to help each other and make progress together.

You could even remove 'make' entirely. Removing 'make' would sound more natural, but 'make progress' sounds just fine. 凄い

This is my first writing, please give me manya lot of feedbacks hhhhh This is my first writing, please give me a lot of feedback hhhhh

This is my first writing, please give me manya lot of feedbacks hhhhh This is my first writing, please give me a lot of feedback hhhhh

We use 'a lot of' for things you can't count, and many for things you *can* count. "A lot of feedback" vs "many notes". Could also say "many pointers", "many tips", or "a lot of help".

This is my first time writing, so please give me manya lot of feedbacks hhhhh. This is my first time writing, so please give me a lot of feedback.

'feedback' is an abstract noun. As a general rule, most cannot be pluralized, and this is one of them. I'm not sure what the 'hhhhh' meant, so I removed it. I tweaked a few things to improve flow.