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SummerTeaWater

May 7, 2021

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Talk about my mento

Yesterday I saw a live youtube where my language mento was participated.

I met him in university and he was too talented that he could speak more than six languages.
I always admire him and I have been trying everything which he did.
It is not just because of his language skill.
It is also because of his deligent and his kindness.

Because I don't live his house anymore, so I can't meet him for ten years.
But I always do my best to get his strengths.

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Talk aing About mMy mMentor

"Mentor" = a teacher
"Mento" = a candy brand

In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.

Yesterday I saw a live ystream on Youtube where my language mentor was participateding.

I met him in university, and he was toso talented that he could speak more than six languages.

I've always admire him and I have been trying to do everything which he did.

It is not just because of his skill with language skills.

"It is" is often said/written as "It's".

It is also because of his deiligentce and his kindness.

"It is" is often said/written as "It's".

Because I don't live in his house anymore, so I can't meI haven't been able to met him for ten years.

But I always do my best to get his strengths.

I don't know what you mean by "his strengths".

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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SummerTeaWater

May 10, 2021

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Thank you very much :)

But I always do my best to get his strengths.


But I always do my best to get his strengths.

I don't know what you mean by "his strengths".

Talk about my mento


Talk aing About mMy mMentor

"Mentor" = a teacher "Mento" = a candy brand In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.

Yesterday I saw a live youtube where my language mento was participated.


Yesterday I saw a live ystream on Youtube where my language mentor was participateding.

I met him in university and he was too talented that he could speak more than six languages.


I met him in university, and he was toso talented that he could speak more than six languages.

I always admire him and I have been trying everything which he did.


I've always admire him and I have been trying to do everything which he did.

It is not just because of his language skill.


It is not just because of his skill with language skills.

"It is" is often said/written as "It's".

It is also because of his deligent and his kindness.


It is also because of his deiligentce and his kindness.

"It is" is often said/written as "It's".

Because I don't live his house anymore, so I can't meet him for ten years.


Because I don't live in his house anymore, so I can't meI haven't been able to met him for ten years.

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