June 15, 2025
Taking a Short Breather
This weekend I spend my time at San Fernando, Cadiz, Spain. I use to work at Madrid from Wednesday to Friday. But this weekend, I decided to stay with my family. The four of us are living here at San Fernando since summer of 2021.
This time for me has been a short breath from my busy schedule at Madrid, and I intend to stay with my loved ones until next Wednesday.
I think is the best decision I made lately.
Luckily, I would be able to take a nap now. See you in my next post!
Taking a Short Breather
This weekend, I spent my time with my family in San Fernando, Cadiz, Spain. I work in Madrid from Wednesday to Friday.
This weekend, I decided to stay with my family.
The four of us have been living here in San Fernando since the summer of 2021.
For me, this time has been a short breather from my busy schedule in Madrid. I intend to stay here with my loved ones until next Wednesday.
I think is the best decision I’ve made lately.
Luckily, I can take a nap now. See you in my next post!
This weekend I spend my time atwent to San Fernando, Cadiz, Spain.
You could also say "I went home to" instead of just “I went to"
I use to work atin Madrid from Wednesday to Friday.
This is the proper form if you have not quit your job.
The four of us arehave been living here atin San Fernando since the summer of 2021.
A note is this implies that you usually spend your time not at work with your family, which would mean the previous sentence was not a one off decision. For that sentence you could say instead, "On the weekends, I stay with my family." Or if it is rare you return home, you could explain why you usually do not.
This time for me has been awith my family is giving me short breathk from my busy schedule at Madrid, and. I intend to stay with my loved ones until next Wednesday.
You could technically keep this as one sentence but I think it sounds better as two.
I thinkThis is the best decision I've made lately.
"I think" is grammatically correct, but "This" is stylistically correct, because we know this is from your perspective.
Luckily, I would be able tocan take a nap now.
See you in my next post!
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Good work, see you next time!
June 16, 2025
Thanks a lot, dear corrector! That’s why I am doing writing, I want to improve it.
Taking a Short Breather
This weekend, I spendt my time atin San Fernando, Cadiz, Spain.
I used to work atin Madrid from Wednesday to Friday.
But this weekend, I decided to stay with my family.
The four of us arehave been living here atin San Fernando since summer of 2021.
This time for me has been a short breather from my busy schedule atin Madrid, and I intend to stay (here) with my loved ones until next Wednesday.
I think this is the best decision I've made lately.
Luckily, I would be'm able to take a nap now.
See you in my next post!
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Very good. Cadiz seems nice. =)
June 16, 2025
Great feedback, I agree with everything here. For the sake of it sounding better, I would correct this phrase and say ' For me, this time has been a short breather'.
June 16, 2025
Yes, indeed! Thanks a lot for your comments, I really appreciate your time invested correcting me.
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This weekend I spend my time at San Fernando, Cadiz, Spain. This weekend, I spen This weekend I You could also say "I went home to" instead of just “I went to" |
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The four of us are living here at San Fernando since summer of 2021. The four of us The four of us A note is this implies that you usually spend your time not at work with your family, which would mean the previous sentence was not a one off decision. For that sentence you could say instead, "On the weekends, I stay with my family." Or if it is rare you return home, you could explain why you usually do not. |
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This time for me has been a short breath from my busy schedule at Madrid, and I intend to stay with my loved ones until next Wednesday. This time for me has been a short breather from my busy schedule This time You could technically keep this as one sentence but I think it sounds better as two. |
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I think is the best decision I made lately. I think this is the best decision I've made lately.
"I think" is grammatically correct, but "This" is stylistically correct, because we know this is from your perspective. |
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Luckily, I would be able to take a nap now. Luckily, I Luckily, I |
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